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Q: Dear Admissions Committee Members,
It is my pleasure to recommend *** ***, who I taught in her university studies from the year 2014 to the year 2017 in several subjects.in that time *** demonstrated tremendous effort study two different majors in two different places at the same time. which were architectural industries at *** University and Korean language at *** institute.
she has that combination of a positive attitude and the belief that she can always improve along with her ability to research and learn about whatever can satisfy her passion for the field she is interested in. I can hardly remember any time that *** skipped classes or neglected one of her homework. She was always disciplined and committed on dates, which supports her sense of responsibility and sense of commitment. I think she tends in general to practical and field subjects, but she can make a great achievement in studying literary subjects if she has a passion.
*** is a trustworthy, reliable, good-humored student and friend who supports others in and out of the classroom. she was a pleasure to have in class, and her positive attitude and belief in herself even in the face of difficulty is an immensely admirable asset. I'm confident that she will continue to demonstrate the same diligence, perseverance, and optimism that he showed me and his peers. I highly recommend *** for admission to your master's program. Please let me know if there is any additional information, I can provide to support you in your decision-making process at ****@gmail.com.

Sincerely,
Q: Dear Admissions Officer,

It is a great pleasure for me to recommend Peter for admission to NUS. During his undergraduate career, I was assigned to be his academic advisor, and also have had the privilege to be his studio master the following design courses :
i. Architectural Design
ii. Residential District Planning and Design
iii. Graduation Design

Frankly, I have witnessed him grow into a well-rounded and mature young man. He impressed me with his passion and talent for urban design. He was good at observation and analysis, and could always think of a good point to decompose the city, so as to be articulated in expressing his ideas and thoughts.

Peter and I kept in deep touch after his graduation, he came to me and express his desire and interest to attend NUS and asked me about the possibility of further education. He also demonstrated a high sense of social responsibility when being an architect. I always thought that he could be an expert in this field.

Peter’s personal abilities are as impressive as his academic accomplishments. He has proved to be a take-charge person and extremely kind and sensible, eager to share his knowledge. Being elected president of the Architecture Society proves that he was well-loved and well-respected by his classmates.

After his graduation, I also recommended him PERAL RIVER ARCHITECTS where he worked afterwards, one of the top and oldest architecture firms in Guangzhou. I believe the years of professional work have given him a clearer mind and confidence and he is ready to go beyond the Normal classroom experience at NUS. I sincerely recommend that you consider Peter’s application as he will be a great asset to your programme.

sincerely,



sembra naturale?
A: × He was good at observation and analysis, and could always think of a good point to decompose the city, so as to be articulated in expressing his ideas and thoughts.
✓ He was good at observation and analysis, and could always think of a good point to <<<>>> the city, so as to be articulate in expressing his ideas and thoughts.

× Peter and I kept in deep touch after his graduation, he came to me and express his desire and interest to attend NUS and asked me about the possibility of further education.
✓ Peter and I kept in close touch after his graduation, and he came to me to express his desire and interest in attending NUS, and asked me about the possibility of further education.

× He also demonstrated a high sense of social responsibility when being an architect.
✓ He also demonstrated a high sense of social responsibility related to being an architect.

× He has proved to be a take-charge person and extremely kind and sensible, eager to share his knowledge.
✓ He has proved to be a take-charge person, and extremely kind and sensible, eager to share his knowledge.

× Being elected president of the Architecture Society proves that he was well-loved and well-respected by his classmates.
✓ Being elected president of the Architecture Society proved that he was well-loved and well-respected by his classmates.

× After his graduation, I also recommended him PERAL RIVER ARCHITECTS where he worked afterwards, one of the top and oldest architecture firms in Guangzhou.
✓ After his graduation, I also recommended him to PERAL RIVER ARCHITECTS where he worked afterwards, one of the top and oldest architecture firms in Guangzhou.

× I believe the years of professional work have given him a clearer mind and confidence and he is ready to go beyond the Normal classroom experience at NUS.
✓ I believe the years of professional work have given him a clearer mind and confidence, and he is ready to go beyond the Normal classroom experience of NUS.

Are you absolutely sure that – decompose – is the right word?

I don’t know enough about architecture to answer this, but it does seem very strange in the context.

Other than that, your writing is very easy to understand. Well done.

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