Domande riguardo a frasi esempio con, spiegazione d'utilizzo di "Dcms"s

A: × The DCMS, a depertment of the government, has responsibility for arts and culture in the UK.
✓ The DCMS, a department of the government, has responsibility for arts and culture in the UK.

× Arts keeping an appropriate distance between government under the principle of “Arm’ s Length,” DCMS carries out policies which places an emphasis on the freedom of expression and the independence of arts.
✓ Keeping an appropriate distance between government under the principle of 'Arm's Length,' DCMS carries out policies that place an emphasis on the freedom of expression and the independence of arts.

× So, the subsidies for the industry are provided by a non-departmental public institution of DCMS called Arts Council England.
✓ Because of this, the subsidies for the industry are provided by a non-departmental public institution of DCMS called Arts Council England.

× In contrast, Cool Japan Strategy, a Japan’s culture policy which aims the economic growth and her “soft power,” is led by the Ministry of Economy, Trade and Industry.
✓ In contrast, a Japanese culture policy that is led by their Ministry of Economy, Trade and Industry called the 'Cool Japan Strategy' emphasises fiscal growth as well as 'soft power'.

1. Anytime you're faced with a tricky word to spell, it might help to break it up into syllables: de-part-ment.

2. " " are only used to mark direct speech. For quoting, use ' '.

3. Changed 'so' to 'because of this'.
This was done to create better cohesion between sentences and show direct causation.

4. Changed 'aims' to 'emphasises'. Also reworded the entire sentence. It now features a relative clause to aid sentence flow.

5. Calling a country human pronouns *is* something we do, but it tends to be in more positive contexts than this.

Hope this helps!