Domande riguardo a frasi esempio con, spiegazione d'utilizzo di "Intravascular"s

A: × Sepsis or cancer leads overproduction of tissue factor (TF) throughout the body.
✓ Sepsis or cancer leads to overproduction of tissue factors (TF) throughout the body.

× These microthrombus can cause infarction and ischemia of brain, lung, heart and many other organs.
✓ Those microthrombi can cause infarction and ischemia of the brain, lung, heart, and many other organs.

× After the thrombosis around the body, the body try to solve the situation and encourage fibrinolysis (a process that prevents blood clots from growing).
✓ After the thrombosis around the body, the body tries to solve the situation and encourage fibrinolysis (a process that prevents blood clots from growing).

× The overreactive fibrinolysis results in bleeding in brain, lung and digestive tract.
✓ The overreactive fibrinolysis results in bleeding in the brain, lung, and digestive tract.

× For the treatment of DIC, the patient will be administered anticoagulant agent and replacement therapy (eg, platelets, cryoprecipitate, fresh frozen plasma) but the most important treatment is treatment of cause.
✓ For the treatment of DIC, the patient will be administered an anticoagulant agent and replacement therapy (eg, platelets, cryoprecipitate, fresh frozen plasma) but the most important treatment is the treatment of the cause.

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A: It is very important to distinguish IF/THAT intravascular gas of/IN the organs occurred before death OR after death.

I wrote my corrections in capital letters to make them easy to see. But I am not an expert in intravascular gas (or death). Do only dead organisms develop this gas? If yes, then my correction "OR" is probably wrong, and I would have to think differently to give you a good correction.