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Q:
It is correct?
"Seagulls have always given me a feeling of inner peace, of balance. Especially the first time I returned to the sea after the pandemic, watching them fly in the air eliminated all fear. And it is from them that I was inspired for my book."
"Seagulls have always given me a feeling of inner peace, of balance. Especially the first time I returned to the sea after the pandemic, watching them fly in the air eliminated all fear. And it is from them that I was inspired for my book."
A:
It’s a very poetic and beautiful image here… just a few suggestions to improve it-
1. “..watching them fly in the air…” - you may consider removing “in the air” because obviously that’s where birds fly. So, just keeping “…watching them fly…” will make it more crisp.
2. “Eliminated all fear” - this phrase doesn’t sound as personal as the rest of the paragraph does. Perhaps you could write it differently like “…watching them fly took away all my own fears…” or something to that end.
3. “…it is from them that I was inspired for my book.” - the correct usage would be “inspired BY something TO do something” not “inspired FROM something FOR something”. Here, you could consider writing “…it is because of them that I was inspired to write my book”
Hope that helps! :)
1. “..watching them fly in the air…” - you may consider removing “in the air” because obviously that’s where birds fly. So, just keeping “…watching them fly…” will make it more crisp.
2. “Eliminated all fear” - this phrase doesn’t sound as personal as the rest of the paragraph does. Perhaps you could write it differently like “…watching them fly took away all my own fears…” or something to that end.
3. “…it is from them that I was inspired for my book.” - the correct usage would be “inspired BY something TO do something” not “inspired FROM something FOR something”. Here, you could consider writing “…it is because of them that I was inspired to write my book”
Hope that helps! :)
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