Domande riguardo a frasi esempio con, spiegazione d'utilizzo di "Diary"s

A: Ok, thank you!
The diary is long-sought after, so many people have been trying to get it because it had an entry that could bring out bad information on President Kennedy

A: @waterflowersplants Yup your right. The only way I’ve seen adults use it is either on tv in depicting people from the last century or to joke with each other. Ex: Your friend comes in and has a lovestruck look on their face because they talked to their crush. That’s when you pretend to take out a pencil and write in the air in a fake diary and say in a teasing voice “Dear Diary, I finally I talked to my crush today! They are so dreamy” and start laughing. That’s when you friend either doesn’t care or chases you down.

A: It means where you record your learning

A: I think you mean "dairy" instead of "diary". Free from dairy (products) means free from milk-based ingredients.

A: Paraphrase:
He hurried in late, making an emotional appeal as an excuse for his lateness (pleading), saying that he wrote the dates/times incorrectly in his scheduling book(mix-up).

A: ✔️ Today’s my birthday🍰

It was my 21st. [“21st birthday” is implied]
Or
I turned 21. [optional/implied: “years old”]

I couldn’t have imagined becoming/being an adult when I was young.

I’ll study English hard to prepare for (or “to get ready for” or “so I can go”) going abroad this year.

✔️My mother and brother took me to dinner last night.


I hope you had a good time at dinner! Happy birthday

A: Both would mean to write about daily life, but journal is a more mature word. A child would keep a diary, but an adult would keep a journal.

A: You would say "write in a diary" usually, but there really is no difference. Both mean you use a diary.

A: Diary: you write down things, which are private and what happened in your day with feelings etc. A journal: a daily record of news and events of a personal nature; a diary. **It is basically the same**

A: They are about the same thing, but a diary is usually personal articles that you write, more often "girly" nowadays. A journal can be more of a log about anything, like a traveling journal. They both have lots about someone's life.

A: They're actually synonyms of one another; but!

A diary is strictly a record of *personal and daily experiences. Journal could mean a more *general record or logbook but more importantly a technical journal, that is a scientific or industry-related publication/periodical.

So,

Diary = Personal thoughts.
Journal = Records that you wouldn't mind other people seeing.

Hope this helps :)

A: diary - usually more private than a journal (ex: personal diary)
journal - can be private or public (ex: travel journal)
entry - one story or article from a diary or journal (ex: diary or journal entry)

A: A diary is often more personal than a journal and by definition is something you write in daily. A journal doesn't necessarily contain personal thoughts though it often does.

A: はい、正しいです。

もう少し自然的: "I shouldn’t have thrown away my diary that time."

at抜きでもいいです。

A: great work, very understandable. three corrections

"Finally, my self-quarantine is done." (minor spelling, punctuation, and verb-tense correction.)

"Yes, I have a bathroom but... I can't take a shower in it." (correcting informal written text like in a diary is tricky because there are many ways to say something that is understandable. I've corrected it so it sounds a little more natural to me. repeating the subject "my bathroom" is considered redundant and unnecessary. By rearranging the sentence structure, we can cut down on repeated words which can make written text sound a bit amateur and less natural.)

"shower stall" (booth is acceptable and understandable but most people call them "stalls")

A: It depends a bit on the tense and context.

My sister has a diary, I feel tempted to read it.

There's my sister's diary, I'm tempted to read it. (pointing at it)

If my sister had/started a diary, I would be tempted to read it.

If my sister left her diary out, I would be tempted to read it.

If you keep teasing me with your diary, I'll(I will) be tempted to read it.

A: i started writing english in my diary.

A: You mean correct the diary?

...in a suburb which is 15 minutes by bus from the city, and I got a job at a Japanese restaurant.
I guess, spelling of...figured... Though better to use "saw"
Even though I was new (or add the job title after "a new")

A: Here is my edited version of your diary entry:
"Today is the sixth day since I started writing in my diary. I was so busy at work and had so much to do, so I couldn't take a bath with my daughter. I'm so bummed out about it...
By the way, for the first time in a while, it did not rain today. Summer is usually a rainy season, but this summer it has been very cold. This doesn't seem like summer at all, and I hate it! I want to go fishing in the sea on a sunny day."

I hope this helps! I reworded some sentences to make them sound more natural. If you have any questions, feel free to ask! 😊

A: 'Today is the fifth day since I started writing in my diary. I am so tired because I went back to work today. I almost had to do desk work.
I also went to my English class and learnt the word 'cuisine'. It has the same meaning as 'dish'. My teacher however, said that this is used to indicate specific dishes, such as French cuisine, Japanese cuisine etc.
I never learnt the word and I was moved by the meaning of it. I realized once again that English is a lot of fun!
Someday, I will be able to speak English more fluently, and go abroad for my job. I'll do my best!

Good job! Except for few corrections you did great! Keep up the great work!

A: This in general is quite well written! Here is the passage with my edits:

"Today is the fourth day since I started writing in my diary. It is also the last day of my vacation, and I will resume work tomorrow. I'm really sad about that. :(
By the way, I went shopping to a nearby shopping mall with my family. My sister and I went to a playroom there. There were so many children, so I was stuck in there. My sister said that she wanted to go to a doll shop, so we went there. We looked at the dolls around us and she liked the "Winnie the Pooh" doll the best. I wanted to buy it for her but it was so expensive, so I decided to buy it for her birthday."

I hope this helps! 😊 If you have any questions about any of the edits, feel free to ask!

A: It is time to write in my diary.
Today I had a fun time with my family, we went to a aquarium in Saitama. There are a bunch of fish that live in Saitama river. My daughter seemed to enjoy it there, but she reacted better when I took her to the zoo. I wonder if she likes animals more than sea life. Tomorrow is the last day of my vacation:( I am depressed... But I have to work hard to pay off my loan!!! I will do my best:)

That's all.Thank you:)

A: I "will" start writing English diary today

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