Domande riguardo a frasi esempio con, spiegazione d'utilizzo di "Nicky"s

A: × Dear, Nicky
✓ Dear Nicky,

× I’m pleased to receive your email that you want to go shopping with me
✓ I’m pleased to receive your email saying that you want to go shopping with me.

× I also want to go shopping with you
✓ I also want to go shopping with you.

× I think that outlets which is located in suburb of Seoul might be the best place to go shopping.
✓ I think that outlets which are located in suburbs of Seoul might be the best places to go shopping.

× We can see almost everything from A to Z
✓ We can see almost everything from A to Z.

× I did the research about some outlets that we could go in advance
✓ I did research in advance about some outlets that we could go to,

× I will attach the outlet list for your reference
✓ and I will attach the outlet list for your reference.

× I’m just wondering what day do you available for shopping
✓ I’m just wondering what day you are available (to go shopping together)?

× As every outlet are located outside of Seoul, we can go there either by public transportation or by driving a car directly
✓ As all of the outlets are located outside of Seoul, we can go there either by public transportation or by driving a car.

× Please let me know how do you want to go there
✓ Please let me know how do you want to go there.

× For having efficient shopping, we’d better to make a shopping list
✓ For having efficient shopping, we’d better make a shopping list.

× Every shop’s place is classified with what product they sell such as luxury clothing section, sports wear section, shoes sections.
✓ Every shop is classified into sections, according to the products they sell such as luxury clothing, sports wear and shoes.

× So if we have a shopping list, we could find out brand more quickly along the venue.
✓ So if we have a shopping list we could find the items we want more quickly.

× So please let me know what you want to go shopping in advance.
✓ So please let me know what you want to shop for, in advance.

× Thanks
✓ Thanks!

A: Yes, it does. “Dropped by” usually means “came by.”

A: Your sentences are too short. You need to make them longer.