Domande riguardo a frasi esempio con, spiegazione d'utilizzo di "Oliver"s

A: On the character's ninth birthday, they were very skinny and scrawny. Perhaps starving or looking weak.

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I got it! Thanks a lot 😁

A: Oliver Twist is the name of a novel witten by Charles Dickens.

A: She wants Oliver to take his stuff and move out. She doesn't want him to live with her anymore

A: I don't know the story, but it's used as a proper noun (i.e. a name) in this case, so it should be capitalized. Or if it is not a character, but rather the nature (of the earth itself), that also can be capitalized to signify it's importance (as in Nature or Mother Nature).

A: Oliver saw them stole money

A: I'm not sure what you meant, so here is two options -

Possessive (the baby is Oliver's) -
"Oliver Tomach's baby,"

As an exclamation (English speakers sometimes add 'baby' after a phrase to sound smug) -
"It's Oliver Tomach, baby!"

A: × When Oliver is absorbed in something, he forgets about the time and plays by himself without feeling lonely, but when he looks around and notices that his big brother is not there, he may abruptly feel as if he is the only one left behind in the world.
✓ When Oliver is absorbed in something, he forgets about the time and plays by himself without feeling lonely, but when he looks around and notices that his big brother is not there, he may abruptly feel as if he is the only one left in the world.

Overall very good!

A: It depends what Fagin is. If it was a person or creature of significance you would say "fagin was in the room"
If it was something else youd use the other way. Example (when oliver awoke, there was smoke in the room)
Both ways make sense though

A: I have a few suggestions to make this sound slightly more natural.

1. Try rephrasing the third paragraph like this, "I'm writing to update you on the status of our ongoing project."

2. Try making this change to the first two sentences of the fourth paragraph, "Nike Japan told us that they can't accept our proposal; however, is seems to be a part of negotiation." Adding the semicolon in the middle the helps the message flow better.

3. As for the rest of the fourth paragraph, I recommend rephrasing it like this, "They're business has benefitted greatly from ours, so I believe they will decide to renew their contract with us. We do not need to compromise with them. We should wait and see what their next move will be."

4. Change "there's" in paragraph five to "there are". Because the subject of the sentence is plural, you use "are" instead of "is".

5. My final suggestion is to avoid using contractions. Typically, when you are writing in a business setting, you want to avoid using contractions such as "I'm", "can't", "won't", "they'll", and so on. Your writing will sound more professional the fewer contractions you use.

I hope this helps!

A: when he saw