Domande riguardo a frasi esempio con, spiegazione d'utilizzo di "Yesturday"s

A: Ayer yo compré un carro.

A: × yesturday,I went to zoo that was only bard.
✓ Yesterday, I went to a zoo that only had birds. (or you can say 'bird zoo'? Sorry, I'm not sure what it's called in Japan.)

× I think this zoo is not fun because there is only bard.but,It isn't taht,It was very fun.it is very enjoy to play with several burd,and burd ride on sholder.then I went to sushi restrant with my family to eat sushi.
✓ I thought I wouldn't have fun, but it wasn't true. I ended up having fun. I enjoyed playing with several birds. A bird even rode on my shoulder. After that, I went to a sushi restaurant with my family to eat sushi.

× I can't spend time with my family recentry.so I have spend good time with my famiry.
✓ I could not spend time with my family recently so I was happy to have a good time with them.

Good try! 😊

A: It would be better to say “yesterday the cost of this dress was cheaper than it is today”

A: I sent it yesterday.