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Inglese (Stati Uniti)
When do you feel happiest in a day? I’m liable to get worried about many things. But after taking a bath, I lie in bed, noticing the moon lighting up in the sky , whose light is not so bright as the sun but very tenderly lightening us up . Seeing the moon teaches me how wonderful it is to live in this world. sembra naturale?
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
When do you feel happiest (REPLACE "in a" with "during the") day? (REPLACE "I’m liable" with "I tend") to get worried about many things(REPLACE ". But" with ", but") after taking a bath, I lie in bed, noticing the moon (REPLACE "lighting" with "shining") up in the sky, whose light is not so bright as the sun but very tenderly (REPLACE "lightening us up" with "shining down on us") . Seeing the moon teaches me how wonderful it is to live in this world.
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When do you feel happiest during the day? I tend to get worried about many things, but after taking a bath, I lie in bed, noticing the moon shining up in the sky, whose light is not so bright as the sun but very tenderly shining down on us. Seeing the moon teaches me how wonderful it is to live in this world.
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- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
When do you feel happiest (REPLACE "in a" with "during the") day? (REPLACE "I’m liable" with "I tend") to get worried about many things(REPLACE ". But" with ", but") after taking a bath, I lie in bed, noticing the moon (REPLACE "lighting" with "shining") up in the sky, whose light is not so bright as the sun but very tenderly (REPLACE "lightening us up" with "shining down on us") . Seeing the moon teaches me how wonderful it is to live in this world.
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When do you feel happiest during the day? I tend to get worried about many things, but after taking a bath, I lie in bed, noticing the moon shining up in the sky, whose light is not so bright as the sun but very tenderly shining down on us. Seeing the moon teaches me how wonderful it is to live in this world.
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Thanks for your kind corrections! They are very useful and helpful to me 😊
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
You're welcome @Akiko46598080 ! I'm glad they helped you.
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