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quolia444
9 mag 2015

  • Giapponese
  • Inglese (Regno Unito)
  • Inglese (Stati Uniti)
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According to the fans who got to see the first day of their live concert in Japan, they seem to have sung many old songs like A and B.
 sembra naturale?

I talked about the band earlier, and this sentence follows. That's why I used "their"instead of "the". Hope this makes sense.
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justinc
9 mag 2015

  • Maltese
  • Inglese (Regno Unito)

Naturale

"According to the fans who got to see the first day of their live concert in Japan" - probably would make more sense with some context... hmm I dunno ... they "got to see the first day of their live concert"?

Are you just trying to say this: "According to the fans who got to see the first day of the live concert" ... ah ok - ye I think you were trying to say that no? (replace "their" with "the"). Putting "their" there confused me a little.

So I guess I should have ranked it as "unnatural".

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quolia444
9 mag 2015

  • Giapponese
Thank you for your insightful comment.

I talked about the band earlier, and this sentence follows. ( I just picked up this part from the whole sentence) That's why I used "their"instead of "the". Hope this makes sense.
justinc
9 mag 2015

  • Maltese
  • Inglese (Regno Unito)

Naturale

No problem. Ye actually, on second reading, "their" is fine too. I just somehow felt it was a bit off first time I read it.

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quolia444
12 mag 2015

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皆さん投票のありがとうございました。justinc-sanコメントもいただきありがとうございました。^_^
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