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10 nov 2018
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Inglese (Stati Uniti)
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What we came up with is decline population in workplace, which is mainly caused by the aging society that is rapidly in progress. The absolute solution would be hiring foreign workers. Now the policy of accepting immigrants is changing in Japan. We have to change it in the way that immigrants can live here without having any trouble, which requires governments financial help. This is the solution we made in order to solve the decline population in workplace. sembra naturale?
What we came up with is decline population in workplace, which is mainly caused by the aging society that is rapidly in progress. The absolute solution would be hiring foreign workers. Now the policy of accepting immigrants is changing in Japan. We have to change it in the way that immigrants can live here without having any trouble, which requires governments financial help. This is the solution we made in order to solve the decline population in workplace. sembra naturale?
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10 nov 2018
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- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
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It’s better to say: “what we came up with is a decline in population in the workplace, which is caused mainly by a rapidly aging society. The solution would be hiring foreign workers. The policy in japan is currently changing in japan. There have to be changes made to help immigrants live and adapt easily. This would require government and financial help.”
They way you said it can be understood but grammatically less appealing.
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