- Giapponese
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Inglese (Stati Uniti)
... Jessie chooses smoking as a means of support for her. Jessie implies, “Smoking is the only thing I know that's always just what you think it's going to be. Just like it was the last time and right there when you want it and real quiet” (Norman 47). If smoking is not even allowed, Jessie has absolutely nothing of consolation. Although Jessie finds the one and only smoking that never betrays nor hurts her, it never heals her distress. The two women have shown that alienation is just an affliction even though they had something for their peace of mind to relieve concern. sembra naturale?
I have to maintain the present tense. Using MLA citation.
Thank you in advance.
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
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Jessie chooses smokingto smoke as a means of support for her.
Jessie chooses smokingto smoke as a means of support for her.
Jessie implies, “Smoking is the only thing I know that's always just what you think it's going to be. Just like it was the last time and right there when you want it and real quiet” (Norman 47).
If smoking is not even allowed, Jessie has absolutely nothingno of consolation.
If smoking is not even allowed, Jessie has absolutely nothingno of consolation.
Although Jessie finds thethat onesmoking andis the only smokingthing that never betrays nor hurts her, it never heals her distress.
Although Jessie finds thethat onesmoking andis the only smokingthing that never betrays nor hurts her, it never heals her distress.
The two women have shown that alienation is just an affliction even though they [already] had something for their peace of mind to relieve concern.
The two women have shown that alienation is just an affliction even though they [already] had something for their peace of mind to relieve concern.
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- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
- Portoghese (Brasile)
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... Jessie chooses smoking as a means of support for her. Jessie implies, “Smoking is the only thing I know that's always just what you think it's going to be. Just like it was the last time and right there when you want it and real quiet” (Norman 47). If smoking is not even allowed, Jessie has absolutely nothing of consolation. Although Jessie realizes that smoking never betrays or hurts her, it never really heals her distress.
This part: "The two women have shown that alienation is just an affliction, even though they had something for their peace of mind to relieve concern."
I suggest you rewrite it. The vocabulary is pretty good, but you should try to make it simpler. I know we always want to say something incredible to impress people, but making it simple and understandable is super commendable. You can even use some advanced expressions. For example:
A possibility: The two women have shown that alienation is a form of suffering. Although they had something to take the edge off, it never worked.
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- Giapponese
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... Jessie chooses smoking as a means of support for her. Jessie implies, “Smoking is the only thing I know that's always just what you think it's going to be. Just like it was the last time and
❌right there when you want it and real quiet” (Norman 47).
If smoking is not ❌even allowed, Jessie has absolutely nothing of consolation. Although Jessie finds the ❌one and only smoking that never betrays nor hurts her, ❌it never heals her distress. The two women have shown that alienation is just an affliction even though they had something for their peace of mind to relieve concern. 🤷♀️
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- Giapponese
❌right there when you want it and real quiet” (Norman 47).
→ I can't change this because it's a quote from the play.
Please give me an explanation about errors in the following sentences.
If smoking is not ❌even allowed, Jessie has absolutely nothing of consolation.
Although Jessie finds the ❌one and only smoking that never betrays nor hurts her, ❌it never heals her distress.
Thank you in advance
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
...
Jessie chooses smokingto smoke as a means of support for her.
Jessie chooses smokingto smoke as a means of support for her.
Jessie implies, “Smoking is the only thing I know that's always just what you think it's going to be. Just like it was the last time and right there when you want it and real quiet” (Norman 47).
If smoking is not even allowed, Jessie has absolutely nothingno of consolation.
If smoking is not even allowed, Jessie has absolutely nothingno of consolation.
Although Jessie finds thethat onesmoking andis the only smokingthing that never betrays nor hurts her, it never heals her distress.
Although Jessie finds thethat onesmoking andis the only smokingthing that never betrays nor hurts her, it never heals her distress.
The two women have shown that alienation is just an affliction even though they [already] had something for their peace of mind to relieve concern.
The two women have shown that alienation is just an affliction even though they [already] had something for their peace of mind to relieve concern.
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- Giapponese
thank you for your corrections and advice. It's so helpful.
I'm struggling with word choices. Speaking and writing are different, so sometimes I need to look up how to express what I'm trying to say. And I don't know what I found is appropriate...
Soo hard.. But thank you again.
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
@Ma_Gugu absolutely! Your English is obliviously very advanced. It's just a matter of being exposed to and having to write lots of this type of English. Good luck!
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