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esejacky
11 nov 2020

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"When it comes to video games, I'm not interested in their realistic graphic. We don't always need reality to have fun. Take Super Mario Brothers as an example. It was made in the 1980's, but there are still quite a few fans, including me, around the globe."
Does this sound natural?

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aaronlockhart
11 nov 2020

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Yes, thats pretty good. The only thing I'd change is make "realistic graphic" "realistic graphics" and change "reality" to "realism". Another purely stylistic thing that might make the sentence flow a bit better would be removing the second independent clause in the 4th sentence ("It was made in the 1980's, but still has quite a few fans, myself included, around the globe").

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"When it comes to video games, I'm not interested in their realistic graphic. We don't always need reality to have fun. Take Super Mario Brothers as an example. It was made in the 1980's, but there are still quite a few fans, including me, around the globe." Does this sound natural?
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