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Not that I was very excited reading all of her essays, but I enjoyed some of them.
One of my favorites was the story about when her most successful novel "Pay It Forward" was rejected by her long-time agent.
Her agent didn't like it, and Hyde changed the agent for a new one and made "Pay It Forward" published.
Then it became a national bestseller, was translated into 23 languages (Japanese wasn't included in them), and was adapted into the motion picture of the same name.
I myself haven't read it mainly because it's not on the Kindle Unlimited list, but I think I will in the near future.