Can someone correct it, please?

I am writing, owing to an announcement which has recently appeared on hotel Brighton’s website. It refers to recruiting people for the position of a receptionist in the summer. I am interested in that placement. My reason for applying is that this position corresponds to my experience and expectations of the perfect job.

Currently, I am in my third year of secondary school at I High School of Filomaci Ziemi Michałowskiej in Brodnica. I consider myself a hard-working person. Being an assiduous student, I have engaged myself in extracurricular courses in first aid and foreign languages. I am due to take my school leaving exams next May. My ambition is to continue education, attend University, receive a Master’s degree and pursue working in a hotel.
Along my path, I have been actively involved in a few projects. I have successfully complete a Korean Language course. Also, I have attended Student Exchange Programme last year. Due to this experience, I have gained the ability to communicate using over 3 languages (Polish, English, Russian and Korean) and enhanced my interpersonal skills. I have a comprehensive understanding of working in a hotel system.

I believe that my qualifications and experience will make me a competitive candidate for the position. I am ready to attend an interview at any time convenient to you. I can be reached any time via email: alicjakryczka@gmail.com or my mobile phone: 729 728 819

Yours faithfully,
XYZ

Hi, the grammar and the coherence of your writing work well. Here are some general comments on how you can write this cover letter:

since you apply for working in a hotel, you need to know well about the hotel’s business, what qualities they are looking for from the candidates, and what values you’ll add to their business. Emphasize the last point because this is what the employers want to know.

If the hotel values candidates who can speak four languages and this language skill can help the hotel attract more foreign tourists, then you’d better emphasize this right at the beginning to catch employers’ attention. For example, write this like “My reason for applying is that I speak four languages and I believe my language skills can help bring more customers to the hotel”.

However, if the foreign language skill is not that important to this hotel (for example, the hotel is a local one and 99% of the customers speak Polish), then you’ll need to focus on other skills that do matter.

You also mentioned that you had a comprehensive understanding of working in a hotel system. However, there’s no evidence in you letter to support this fact. Where did you gain this comprehensive understanding? Did you work in a hotel before? You need to write a few facts to support this argument. Prior experience is extremely valuable. If you did work in the hotels before, you’ll need to emphasize this at the beginning, even before writing about the language skills.

I see that you mentioned experience in first aid. I believe this is something very important for working in a hotel. I’d write a few sentences about this skill to show that you like helping others and you are customer-oriented.

I also see that you wrote almost a whole paragraph about your study plan and your ambition to obtain a master’s degree. Your plan is good but I don’t see how this is important to your potential employer at this hotel. Unless to advance academically is related to this position (e.g., the hotel offers its receptionists a promotion career path if they obtain a Master’s degree in hospitality), don’t write too much about this. This is not an application letter for a graduate school scholarship. I’d rather focus on the points that are the most valuable to your employers.

I believe you can write a better, more attractive cover letter for this application by improving its contents.