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3 gen 2021
- Spagnolo (Spagna)
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Inglese (Regno Unito)
Domande Inglese (Regno Unito)
Please, are you so kind to correct and improve this email? Thank you so much!
Hello dear Mª Luisa,
I hope you and yours are doing well!
I'm so sorry to bother you. However, I was wondering why you wrote me in my proposal that I need to make a good presentation,
I think that maybe you didn't see it or it didn't arrive you well , by reason of you didn't correct it for me, or do you think it is bad and insufficient presentation or it has to be different?
(A proposal to improve community access and facilities.
It is known by the council that parks and recreation support the health of our community and contribute to the economic and environmental well-being of our city. Hence, the aim of this proposal is to assess current parks and make suggestions for improvements. We must extremely increase the facilities and provide greater public access.)
Again, sorry to bother you and hope you don't mind my asking , but I'd like to know, what I haven't done well to correct myself.
Please, drop me a line when you can, no hurry.
Take care a lot, see you soon!
Juanjo.
Please, are you so kind to correct and improve this email? Thank you so much!
Hello dear Mª Luisa,
I hope you and yours are doing well!
I'm so sorry to bother you. However, I was wondering why you wrote me in my proposal that I need to make a good presentation,
I think that maybe you didn't see it or it didn't arrive you well , by reason of you didn't correct it for me, or do you think it is bad and insufficient presentation or it has to be different?
(A proposal to improve community access and facilities.
It is known by the council that parks and recreation support the health of our community and contribute to the economic and environmental well-being of our city. Hence, the aim of this proposal is to assess current parks and make suggestions for improvements. We must extremely increase the facilities and provide greater public access.)
Again, sorry to bother you and hope you don't mind my asking , but I'd like to know, what I haven't done well to correct myself.
Please, drop me a line when you can, no hurry.
Take care a lot, see you soon!
Juanjo.
Hello dear Mª Luisa,
I hope you and yours are doing well!
I'm so sorry to bother you. However, I was wondering why you wrote me in my proposal that I need to make a good presentation,
I think that maybe you didn't see it or it didn't arrive you well , by reason of you didn't correct it for me, or do you think it is bad and insufficient presentation or it has to be different?
(A proposal to improve community access and facilities.
It is known by the council that parks and recreation support the health of our community and contribute to the economic and environmental well-being of our city. Hence, the aim of this proposal is to assess current parks and make suggestions for improvements. We must extremely increase the facilities and provide greater public access.)
Again, sorry to bother you and hope you don't mind my asking , but I'd like to know, what I haven't done well to correct myself.
Please, drop me a line when you can, no hurry.
Take care a lot, see you soon!
Juanjo.
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3 gen 2021
Domanda in primo piano
- Inglese (Regno Unito)
Ms. Luisa,
I hope you are doing well. I’m sorry to be a bother, however I was wondering as to why you requested that I make a good presentation in response to my earlier proposal. If I’m not wrong I assume that you might’ve not received my proposal or that there is something wrong with it that I should review once again.
(..... the proposal)
Again sorry for the inconvenience. I hope you don’t mind me asking, but I’d appreciate if you could let me know where I’ve gone wrong so as to rectify it as soon as possible. Please get back to me at your earliest convenience.
Thanking you,
Juanjo
(I wasn’t sure about the name, depending on how formal the mail is I suggest write only the name if it is quite formal. I hope I’ve corrected this in accordance to the context. Hope it helps)
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- Inglese (Regno Unito)
Ms. Luisa,
I hope you are doing well. I’m sorry to be a bother, however I was wondering as to why you requested that I make a good presentation in response to my earlier proposal. If I’m not wrong I assume that you might’ve not received my proposal or that there is something wrong with it that I should review once again.
(..... the proposal)
Again sorry for the inconvenience. I hope you don’t mind me asking, but I’d appreciate if you could let me know where I’ve gone wrong so as to rectify it as soon as possible. Please get back to me at your earliest convenience.
Thanking you,
Juanjo
(I wasn’t sure about the name, depending on how formal the mail is I suggest write only the name if it is quite formal. I hope I’ve corrected this in accordance to the context. Hope it helps)
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