Hi English (UK) native speakers! English is my 4th languages. I'm not sure if my sentence below correct, the flow natural and not rude. Please, help me out! THANKS!! :)
➡️ (Since years ago/age ago/time?), the shopping industry has always been everybody need. These place are where people shop for food, clothe , households items and among others. Consequently, the use of trolley is useful to make it easier for consumers carry their groceries and other items. However, mostly the trolley type used now is the traditional type. This old-style traditional trolley still faces some problem, for example, imagine how would a customers feel when they have to face challenging situations such as a crowd in a shop, especially with the current Covid-19 pandemic, also having to wait in long queue, and lastly sometimes there might be a mistake due to big quantity of items in the trolley when the cashier scans the items at checkout counter. It is such a hassle to the customer to have to wait there until the cashier is done fixing and adjusting items at the system counter. We’ve all been there!
Note to reader; Please, I want to use “imagine” word in the text above but I’m not sure how. Could you help me too? TQ sembra naturale?
➡️ (Since years ago/age ago/time?), the shopping industry has always been everybody need. These place are where people shop for food, clothe , households items and among others. Consequently, the use of trolley is useful to make it easier for consumers carry their groceries and other items. However, mostly the trolley type used now is the traditional type. This old-style traditional trolley still faces some problem, for example, imagine how would a customers feel when they have to face challenging situations such as a crowd in a shop, especially with the current Covid-19 pandemic, also having to wait in long queue, and lastly sometimes there might be a mistake due to big quantity of items in the trolley when the cashier scans the items at checkout counter. It is such a hassle to the customer to have to wait there until the cashier is done fixing and adjusting items at the system counter. We’ve all been there!
Note to reader; Please, I want to use “imagine” word in the text above but I’m not sure how. Could you help me too? TQ sembra naturale?
- Inglese (Regno Unito)
Un po' strano
Hi English (UK) native speakers!
English is my 4th languageslanguage.
English is my 4th languageslanguage.
I'm not sure if my sentence below is correct, theflows flownaturally natural and is not rude.
I'm not sure if my sentence below is correct, theflows flownaturally natural and is not rude.
Please, help me out!
THANKS!!
:)
➡️ (SinceFor yearsa ago/agelong ago/time now?), the shopping industry has always been essential for everybody need.
➡️ (SinceFor yearsa ago/agelong ago/time now?), the shopping industry has always been essential for everybody need.
These placeplaces are where people shop for food, clotheclothes ,and general households items. and(sorry I didn't understand the "among others". part)
These placeplaces are where people shop for food, clotheclothes ,and general households items. and(sorry I didn't understand the "among others". part)
Consequently, the use of trolleytrolleys is usefulused to make it easier for consumers to carry their groceries and other items.
Consequently, the use of trolleytrolleys is usefulused to make it easier for consumers to carry their groceries and other items.
However, mostlymost of the trolleytrolleys type used now isare the traditional type.
However, mostlymost of the trolleytrolleys type used now isare the traditional type.
This old-style traditional trolley still faces some problemproblems, for example, imagine how would a customerscustomer would feel when they have to face challenging situations such as a crowd in a shop, especially with the current Covid-19 pandemic, alsoor having to wait in a long queue,. andSometimes lastly sometimes there might also be a mistake due to big quantity of items in the trolley when the cashier scans the items at the checkout counter.
This old-style traditional trolley still faces some problemproblems, for example, imagine how would a customerscustomer would feel when they have to face challenging situations such as a crowd in a shop, especially with the current Covid-19 pandemic, alsoor having to wait in a long queue,. andSometimes lastly sometimes there might also be a mistake due to big quantity of items in the trolley when the cashier scans the items at the checkout counter.
ItImagine isthe such a hassle to the customer tohaving have to wait there until the cashier is done fixing and adjusting items at the system counter.
ItImagine isthe such a hassle to the customer tohaving have to wait there until the cashier is done fixing and adjusting items at the system counter.
We’ve all been there!
Note to reader; Please, I want to use the word “imagine” word in the text above but I’m not sure how.
Note to reader; Please, I want to use the word “imagine” word in the text above but I’m not sure how.
Could you help me with that too?
Could you help me with that too?
TQ
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- Inglese (Regno Unito)
Un po' strano
Hi English (UK) native speakers!
English is my 4th languageslanguage.
English is my 4th languageslanguage.
I'm not sure if my sentence below is correct, theflows flownaturally natural and is not rude.
I'm not sure if my sentence below is correct, theflows flownaturally natural and is not rude.
Please, help me out!
THANKS!!
:)
➡️ (SinceFor yearsa ago/agelong ago/time now?), the shopping industry has always been essential for everybody need.
➡️ (SinceFor yearsa ago/agelong ago/time now?), the shopping industry has always been essential for everybody need.
These placeplaces are where people shop for food, clotheclothes ,and general households items. and(sorry I didn't understand the "among others". part)
These placeplaces are where people shop for food, clotheclothes ,and general households items. and(sorry I didn't understand the "among others". part)
Consequently, the use of trolleytrolleys is usefulused to make it easier for consumers to carry their groceries and other items.
Consequently, the use of trolleytrolleys is usefulused to make it easier for consumers to carry their groceries and other items.
However, mostlymost of the trolleytrolleys type used now isare the traditional type.
However, mostlymost of the trolleytrolleys type used now isare the traditional type.
This old-style traditional trolley still faces some problemproblems, for example, imagine how would a customerscustomer would feel when they have to face challenging situations such as a crowd in a shop, especially with the current Covid-19 pandemic, alsoor having to wait in a long queue,. andSometimes lastly sometimes there might also be a mistake due to big quantity of items in the trolley when the cashier scans the items at the checkout counter.
This old-style traditional trolley still faces some problemproblems, for example, imagine how would a customerscustomer would feel when they have to face challenging situations such as a crowd in a shop, especially with the current Covid-19 pandemic, alsoor having to wait in a long queue,. andSometimes lastly sometimes there might also be a mistake due to big quantity of items in the trolley when the cashier scans the items at the checkout counter.
ItImagine isthe such a hassle to the customer tohaving have to wait there until the cashier is done fixing and adjusting items at the system counter.
ItImagine isthe such a hassle to the customer tohaving have to wait there until the cashier is done fixing and adjusting items at the system counter.
We’ve all been there!
Note to reader; Please, I want to use the word “imagine” word in the text above but I’m not sure how.
Note to reader; Please, I want to use the word “imagine” word in the text above but I’m not sure how.
Could you help me with that too?
Could you help me with that too?
TQ
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Hi @My_G_Chris. Got it!! I understand your correction. Thank you very much! 🤗🌷
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