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19 feb 2021
- Tedesco
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Inglese (Stati Uniti)
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Latino
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Inglese (Regno Unito)
Domande Inglese (Regno Unito)
Come si dice in Inglese (Regno Unito)? Would anybody be so kind as to correct/check the sentences,especially the grammar?
Come si dice in Inglese (Regno Unito)? Would anybody be so kind as to correct/check the sentences,especially the grammar?
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20 feb 2021
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- Inglese (Regno Unito)
The first paragraph:
For the first sentence, I wouldn't include "the" before Art class and I wouldn't use "but" the first time.
Raju has created a beautiful portrait in Art class, he hasn't painted himself but the girl Kim, who he loves.
The teacher was impressed so Raju was very proud of his accomplishment.
For the third sentence I would do:
However, Kim was embarrassed by the portrait.
In the last sentence the word "cought" is wrong and should be "caught"
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- Inglese (Regno Unito)
The first paragraph:
For the first sentence, I wouldn't include "the" before Art class and I wouldn't use "but" the first time.
Raju has created a beautiful portrait in Art class, he hasn't painted himself but the girl Kim, who he loves.
The teacher was impressed so Raju was very proud of his accomplishment.
For the third sentence I would do:
However, Kim was embarrassed by the portrait.
In the last sentence the word "cought" is wrong and should be "caught"
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- Inglese (Regno Unito)
Second paragraph:
I wouldn't use the second clause "more precisely it helps by a lot" as it sounds repetitive and unnecessary.
In the UK we use "Mum" instead of "Mom"
In the fourth sentence before "at least your teachers" put an "and":
"and at least your teachers are around helping you out."
The words "Choosen" is misspelt and should be "chosen".
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- Inglese (Regno Unito)
Third paragraph:
The first sentence would flow better as:
"I haven't experienced this situation yet, more precisely I haven't had the need to."
The third sentence doesn't make much sense. Instead I would do:
"but you having an experience like that makes you even stronger and more confident."
The last sentence is also is slightly wrong. An alternative is:
"If that isn't true you probably have a date"
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- Inglese (Regno Unito)
The last paragraph:
The first two sentences are correct and read alright.
The third sentence is incorrect.
I would put:
"His thoughts discourage him from asking her out."
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