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- Cinese semplificato (Mandarino)
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Please correct my composition. Thank you very much!
My birthday
February the ninth is my birthday. In the past at my birthday I would go to a restaurant and enjoy my favorite steaks and french fries. This year because of coronavirus we can’t eat out so we celebrated my birthday at home. In order to make the birthdaycake, mum first made some pancakes. Then I put the cream on them, I also add some sliced strawberries and bananas, finally I sprinkled some chocolate crumbles. A homemade cake is ready. This birthday was a different one but I still felt very happy.
Please correct my composition. Thank you very much!
My birthday
February the ninth is my birthday. In the past at my birthday I would go to a restaurant and enjoy my favorite steaks and french fries. This year because of coronavirus we can’t eat out so we celebrated my birthday at home. In order to make the birthdaycake, mum first made some pancakes. Then I put the cream on them, I also add some sliced strawberries and bananas, finally I sprinkled some chocolate crumbles. A homemade cake is ready. This birthday was a different one but I still felt very happy.
My birthday
February the ninth is my birthday. In the past at my birthday I would go to a restaurant and enjoy my favorite steaks and french fries. This year because of coronavirus we can’t eat out so we celebrated my birthday at home. In order to make the birthdaycake, mum first made some pancakes. Then I put the cream on them, I also add some sliced strawberries and bananas, finally I sprinkled some chocolate crumbles. A homemade cake is ready. This birthday was a different one but I still felt very happy.
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- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
My birthday
February 9 is my birthday. In the past, on my birthday, I would go to a restaurant and enjoy my favorite steaks and french fries. But this year, we can't eat outside because of coronavirus so we celebrated my birthday at home. My mom made my birthday cake. In order to do that, she first made some pancakes; then I put the cream on them; I also add some sliced strawberries and bananas, and finally, I sprinkled some chocolate crumbles. And voila! the homemade cake was finished. This birthday was completely different yet I still felt very happy.
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- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
My birthday
February 9 is my birthday. In the past, on my birthday, I would go to a restaurant and enjoy my favorite steaks and french fries. But this year, we can't eat outside because of coronavirus so we celebrated my birthday at home. My mom made my birthday cake. In order to do that, she first made some pancakes; then I put the cream on them; I also add some sliced strawberries and bananas, and finally, I sprinkled some chocolate crumbles. And voila! the homemade cake was finished. This birthday was completely different yet I still felt very happy.
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