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Please correct my composition. Thank you very much!
My birthday
February the ninth is my birthday. In the past at my birthday I would go to a restaurant and enjoy my favorite steaks and french fries. This year because of coronavirus we can’t eat out so we celebrated my birthday at home. In order to make the birthdaycake, mum first made some pancakes. Then I put the cream on them, I also add some sliced strawberries and bananas, finally I sprinkled some chocolate crumbles. A homemade cake is ready. This birthday was a different one but I still felt very happy.

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Please correct my composition. Thank you very much!
      My birthday
   February the ninth is my birthday.  In the past  at my birthday I would go to a restaurant and enjoy my favorite steaks and french fries. This year because of coronavirus we can’t eat out so we celebrated my birthday at home. In order to make the birthdaycake, mum first made some pancakes. Then I put the cream on them, I also add some sliced strawberries and bananas, finally I sprinkled some chocolate crumbles. A homemade cake is ready. This birthday was a different one but I still felt very happy.
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