¿Cómo suena ésto?

Last Saturday at around 1.30 a.m., there was a robbery in my friend's home and someone stole 3 mobile phones and a TV.

My friend's father woke up at 7 o'clock like every day, he turned off the alarm clock and he got up. Then, while he was making breakfast, he saw that the TV isn't there. My friend and her mother got up and they quickly .called the police. Yesterday, my friend told me that they had security cameras at home but they weren't activated. When the police saw the cameras there was nothing but 3 mobile phones and the TV isn't there. Her father said that he thought that the criminal hacked the cameras. The police officers are investigating about the crime to catch the criminal.

The neighbors said that it's necessary cameras more secure for their neighboring. They're scared and said that they weren't slept well until the police catch the criminal The police said that the people could kept at home at night and they said that was important checked that everything was closed.

Last Saturday, at around 1.30 a.m., there was a robbery at my friend's home and someone stole 3 mobile phones and a TV.

My friend's father woke up at 7 o'clock like every day, he turned off the alarm clock and he got up. Then, while he was making breakfast, he saw that the TV wasn't there. My friend and her mother got up and they quickly called the police. Yesterday, my friend told me that they had security cameras at home but they weren't activated. When the police saw the cameras there was nothing but 3 mobile phones and the TV wasn't there. Her father said that he thought that the criminal hacked the cameras. The police officers are investigating the crime to catch the criminal.

The neighbours said that it's necessary to have more secure cameras for their neighbourhood. They're scared and said that they won't be able to sleep well until the police catch the criminal. The police said that the people should stay home at night and they said that it was important to check that everything was closed.


I made some minor changes it was overall very good and easly understandable.