Along time ago, a small group of animals was taking place. “You know what, I can beat anyone in this forest. Nobody can beat me in a race”. The hare said“Yes, an I have been see him running before”, the elephant said "I bet he can beat anyone in the forest". Just then, in the crowd heared somebody laughing.Why are you laughing?The hare said "you think you can beat me in a race".Everybody laugh but the tortoise said"I may not disagree with you Mr.Hare. But I may not deny that I have no fear having competion with you". Everybody laugh again.The hare said”oh really, so let have a race and let see who win. So on one fine sunny day, all the animals gather for the race. Everybody was sure that the hare gone be the clear winner.The hare was laugh and the tortoise was smile.He said
- May the best man win
- And that is me – said the hare
Let go old man I’ll beat you in a second.They reach the starting line and a monkey waved a flag.The hare run so fast that all thing on the path goes for a spin.
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Corrections:
A long time ago, a small group of animals were taking place. “You know what? I can beat anyone in this forest. Nobody can beat me in a race”. The hare declared “Yes, I have see him running before”, the elephant agreed "I bet he can beat anyone in the forest".

Just then, the animals heard laughing in the small crowd. "Why are you laughing?" the hare walked up to the tortoise. "You think you can beat me in a race?". Everybody began laughing, but the tortoise answered "I may not disagree with you Mr.Hare, but I may not deny that I have no fear having competition with you".

Everybody laughed even louder. The hare exclaimed "Oh really? Lets have a race and see who'll win!"

So on one fine sunny day, all the animals gather for the race. Everybody was sure that the hare was the clear winner. The hare was laughing and the tortoise was smiling.

He said
- May the best man win
- And that is me – said the hare
"Let go old man, I’ll beat you in a second." They reached the starting line and the monkey waved the flag. The hare ran so fast that everything on his path was spinning.