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Among a large population,as a single person, our behaviors are seen by everyone and reflect who we are. We are all aware of what we do is an important principle for others to judge us, so why not us to practice moral behaviors in public to meet up with the general consensus on morality?
It is of course a nice thing to practice moral behaviors in public, not only for yourself, but it also benefits our society. Performing moral behaviors means that you're setting a standard to everyone else, showing the best aspects of human beings and appealing others to pursue goodness and essence of humanity. As long as more and more people follow this common good, the harmony and prosperity of our society will be greatly promoted and the sufferings will be largely relieved. It is not denial that not all dark side of us will disappear overnight and the cognition of morality varies from time to time, place to place, but still we all share a similar sense of evil and goodness as well as the dream to build up such Utopia. Although It's hard to realize, we should bear it in mind that we are getting better in morality than ever. It doesn't require a lot of effort to practice moral behaviors in public, even just a simple and subtle thing can make a difference.