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On the other hand, there were some differences from the legal practices of the American comic book industry. When TBS received the huge royalties from the merchandising of the "Super Jetter" characters, half was distributed to the writers. They were very happy with this share. This explains why they, who later became successful writers, tend to glorify their early days in TV animation. In contrast, major comic book publishers in the United States rarely share royalties with writers and artists. This is because fictional characters, including Superman and Wonder Woman, are "patents" owned by the publisher (or rather, its parent company), and royalties from patent licenses belong to the patent owner. sembra naturale?
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Wow your English is really good, I don't see anything wrong.
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On the other hand, there wereare some differences fromin the legal practices of the American comic book industry in the past compared to now.
On the other hand, there wereare some differences fromin the legal practices of the American comic book industry in the past compared to now.
When TBS received the huge royalties from the merchandising of the "Super Jetter" characters in 19XX, half of the profit was distributed to the writers of the show.
When TBS received the huge royalties from the merchandising of the "Super Jetter" characters in 19XX, half of the profit was distributed to the writers of the show.
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TheyThis werewas verysubstantial happyat withthe this share.time
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Thisand explains why theythe TBS writers, who later became successful writers, tend to glorify their early days in TV animation.
In contrast, today, major comic book publishers in the United States rarely share royalties with writers and artists.
In contrast, today, major comic book publishers in the United States rarely share royalties with writers and artists.
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ThisThe ispublishers becausecan fictionaldo charactersthis legally due to patents. With a patent, includingfictional characters such as Superman and Wonder Woman, are "patents" owned by the publisher (or rather, its parent company), and royalties from patent licenses belong to the patent owner.
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@kasumi-09 Sure no problem. If so, I would just remove the sentence “they were very happy with this share”. It doesn’t make sense in the essay as it’s subjective and not supported by evidence.
You can edit my edit btw. Just a suggestion based on my understanding of what you were trying to say. I focused on improving clarity, grammar, and readability.
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Separately, I’m not sure if intended, but writing “THX but, ... this is wrong” is very rude in English. A more polite way would be to say “Thank you for your time in helping edit my writing. I didn’t mean to convey this sentence. Instead I meant to say XYZ. Do you have any suggestions on how to convey this? Thank you”
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