Can anyone pls correct mistakes

Hi there,
We are the regional student group of the BAO which has been working for over 45 years as a representational organisation for all those who have a degree in oecotrophology, nutrition, household science, food science or similar studies or study one of these subjects.
As a university group, we organise events for mainly students of ecotrophology, nutrition & food science and economics, but also for all those who are interested in nutrition. We exchange ideas with experts of the food sector, but also with each other on topics of study and other exciting topics.
Our next event is scheduled for June 7th! Dr. Simone from “brand name” and *name* from the dietician practice “brand name” will tell us about the career opportunities after graduation, the career in nutrition counselling and the future and relevance of the food industry.
If you are interested, contact us on Instagram or at the email address @gmx.de and we will add you to our Whatsapp newsletter.
Many greetings

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Can anyone pls correct mistakes

Hi there,
We are the regional student group of the BAO which has been working for over 45 years as a representational organisation for all those who have a degree in oecotrophology, nutrition, household science, food science or similar studies or study one of these subjects.
As a university group, we organise events for mainly students of ecotrophology, nutrition & food science and economics, but also for all those who are interested in nutrition. We exchange ideas with experts of the food sector, but also with each other on topics of study and other exciting topics. 
Our next event is scheduled for June 7th! Dr. Simone from “brand name” and *name* from the dietician practice “brand name” will tell us about the career opportunities after graduation, the career in nutrition counselling and the future and relevance of the food industry.
If you are interested, contact us on Instagram  or at the email address @gmx.de and we will add you to our Whatsapp newsletter.
Many greetings

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Hi there,
We are the regional student group of the BAO which has been working for over 45 years as a representative organisation for all those who have a degree in ecotrophology, nutrition, household science, food science or similar studies.

As a university group, we organise events for mainly students of ecotrophology, nutrition & food science and economics, but also for all those who are interested in nutrition.

We exchange ideas with experts of the food sector, but also with each other on topics of study and other exciting topics.

Our next event is scheduled for June 7th! Dr. Simone from “brand name” and *name* from the dietician practice “brand name” will tell us about the career opportunities after graduation, the career in nutrition counselling, the future and relevance of the food industry.

If you are interested, contact us on Instagram or at the email address @gmx.de and we will add you to our Whatsapp newsletter.

Many greetings

hope this was helpful 😁

hope this was helpful 😁

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