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20 mag 2021

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There has been a lot of public discussion on whether or not enough is being done to protect the world’s wilderness areas. I believe human beings have started various things to protect such areas for the following reasons.
First, most governments prohibit companies from dumping trash into the sea. In the past, most countries sis not have a law to restrict companies to throw out their trash into the sea since governments valued industrialization over environmental protection, which cause a lot of extinction of fish and sea animals. In order to prevent this situation, these days, many countries set the law that dumping trash into the sea is illegal.
Second, governments are also addressing deforestation. By increasing world’s population, human beings have cut a myriad of trees to get their habitat, which deprived animals of their natural habitat and caused deforestation. Recently, people realize it is not good for wilderness areas, and have started planting trees to such place.
sembra naturale?

Could someone please fix my sentence?
This is an exercise essay for the English grammar exam.

On the day of the test, I will not be allowed to check any website or books and I will need to write three reasons to support my answer, which must be no more than 200 words and must be completed within 30 minutes.
I wrote this under the same conditions as the real thing, so I was not able to provide sufficient evidence.
Also, since I am not good at English, I prioritize the English I am comfortable writing rather than the opinions I really have.
Thank you for reading!
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