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20 mag 2021
- Giapponese
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Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Domande Inglese (Stati Uniti)
There has been a lot of public discussion on whether or not enough is being done to protect the world’s wilderness areas. I believe human beings have started various things to protect such areas for the following reasons.
First, most governments prohibit companies from dumping trash into the sea. In the past, most countries sis not have a law to restrict companies to throw out their trash into the sea since governments valued industrialization over environmental protection, which cause a lot of extinction of fish and sea animals. In order to prevent this situation, these days, many countries set the law that dumping trash into the sea is illegal.
Second, governments are also addressing deforestation. By increasing world’s population, human beings have cut a myriad of trees to get their habitat, which deprived animals of their natural habitat and caused deforestation. Recently, people realize it is not good for wilderness areas, and have started planting trees to such place.
sembra naturale?
There has been a lot of public discussion on whether or not enough is being done to protect the world’s wilderness areas. I believe human beings have started various things to protect such areas for the following reasons.
First, most governments prohibit companies from dumping trash into the sea. In the past, most countries sis not have a law to restrict companies to throw out their trash into the sea since governments valued industrialization over environmental protection, which cause a lot of extinction of fish and sea animals. In order to prevent this situation, these days, many countries set the law that dumping trash into the sea is illegal.
Second, governments are also addressing deforestation. By increasing world’s population, human beings have cut a myriad of trees to get their habitat, which deprived animals of their natural habitat and caused deforestation. Recently, people realize it is not good for wilderness areas, and have started planting trees to such place.
sembra naturale?
First, most governments prohibit companies from dumping trash into the sea. In the past, most countries sis not have a law to restrict companies to throw out their trash into the sea since governments valued industrialization over environmental protection, which cause a lot of extinction of fish and sea animals. In order to prevent this situation, these days, many countries set the law that dumping trash into the sea is illegal.
Second, governments are also addressing deforestation. By increasing world’s population, human beings have cut a myriad of trees to get their habitat, which deprived animals of their natural habitat and caused deforestation. Recently, people realize it is not good for wilderness areas, and have started planting trees to such place.
sembra naturale?
Could someone please fix my sentence?
This is an exercise essay for the English grammar exam.
On the day of the test, I will not be allowed to check any website or books and I will need to write three reasons to support my answer, which must be no more than 200 words and must be completed within 30 minutes.
I wrote this under the same conditions as the real thing, so I was not able to provide sufficient evidence.
Also, since I am not good at English, I prioritize the English I am comfortable writing rather than the opinions I really have.
Thank you for reading!
This is an exercise essay for the English grammar exam.
On the day of the test, I will not be allowed to check any website or books and I will need to write three reasons to support my answer, which must be no more than 200 words and must be completed within 30 minutes.
I wrote this under the same conditions as the real thing, so I was not able to provide sufficient evidence.
Also, since I am not good at English, I prioritize the English I am comfortable writing rather than the opinions I really have.
Thank you for reading!
Risposte
22 mag 2021
Domanda in primo piano
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Naturale
There has been a lot of public discussion on whether or not enough is being done to protect our global environment.
I believe people have started taking positive steps towards protecting the environment for the following reasons.
First, most governments now prohibit companies from dumping trash into our ocean waters. In the past, most countries did not have laws restricting companies from throwing trash into the oceans since they valued (or prioritized) industrialization over environmental protection, causing a lot of extinction of fish and other marine life. In order to prevent this situation, many countries have now established laws which illegalize the dumping of trash into our oceans.
Second, governments are also addressing deforestation. By increasing the world’s population, human beings have cut a myriad of trees for their own purposes, depriving animals of their natural habitats. People are becoming increasingly aware of the negative impact of deforestation on our environment and have started replanting trees to these areas.
Notes:
I suggest 'oceans' instead of 'sea' since oceans are typically considered larger bodies of water. In the US we usually discuss this environmental issue with the word ocean.
I changed human beings cutting trees for their 'habitats' to 'purposes' because the word habitat was used twice in the same sentence, but more importantly, because we cut trees for far more than just our homes. It's cut for fuel, paper, all sorts of daily products like waribashi, etc... all contributing to the problem of deforestation and global warming, climate change, etc...
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@yuukei-mum すみません ><
sis not have a law
which cause a lot of extinction
which deprived animals
Recently, people realize it is
planting trees to such place
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- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Naturale
There has been a lot of public discussion on whether or not enough is being done to protect our global environment.
I believe people have started taking positive steps towards protecting the environment for the following reasons.
First, most governments now prohibit companies from dumping trash into our ocean waters. In the past, most countries did not have laws restricting companies from throwing trash into the oceans since they valued (or prioritized) industrialization over environmental protection, causing a lot of extinction of fish and other marine life. In order to prevent this situation, many countries have now established laws which illegalize the dumping of trash into our oceans.
Second, governments are also addressing deforestation. By increasing the world’s population, human beings have cut a myriad of trees for their own purposes, depriving animals of their natural habitats. People are becoming increasingly aware of the negative impact of deforestation on our environment and have started replanting trees to these areas.
Notes:
I suggest 'oceans' instead of 'sea' since oceans are typically considered larger bodies of water. In the US we usually discuss this environmental issue with the word ocean.
I changed human beings cutting trees for their 'habitats' to 'purposes' because the word habitat was used twice in the same sentence, but more importantly, because we cut trees for far more than just our homes. It's cut for fuel, paper, all sorts of daily products like waribashi, etc... all contributing to the problem of deforestation and global warming, climate change, etc...
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@kumaswan I really appreciate your help! Thank you so much😊🎊🙏
- Giapponese
@jyogafish I’m very grateful to you for your help!
Writing English essay is very difficult for me. So your comment helps me a lot.
I really wanted to write this essay from the standpoint that human efforts to protect the environment are still insufficient, but I couldn't because it was difficult to express the reason in English. ;(
Anyway, thank you so much!😊🥰🙏
Writing English essay is very difficult for me. So your comment helps me a lot.
I really wanted to write this essay from the standpoint that human efforts to protect the environment are still insufficient, but I couldn't because it was difficult to express the reason in English. ;(
Anyway, thank you so much!😊🥰🙏
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Naturale
@yuukei-mum
Your essay was SO well written I was very impressed. That's why I corrected it kind of strictly because I could tell you were very serious and could handle this level of critique.
Great job!
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