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makatakei
19 giu 2021

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  • Inglese (Stati Uniti)
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When I tried to pick it up on the floor, I suddenly felt discomfort in my waist. I thought I got a strained back again. I've had a cramp in my left calf since last week. I'm afraid my health condition. sembra naturale?

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Bw63
19 giu 2021

  • Inglese (Stati Uniti)

Non naturale

When I tried to pick it up onoff the floor, I suddenly felt discomfort in my waist.

When I tried to pick it up onoff the floor, I suddenly felt discomfort in my waist.

I thought I gothad a strained my back again.

I thought I gothad a strained my back again.

I've had a cramp in my left calf since last week.

I'm afraidconcerned about my health condition.

I'm afraidconcerned about my health condition.

You could also write "I'm afraid of my health condition" but that is not typical. The sentences need to flow better, be longer and more complex. "I thought I had strained my back again, and have had a cramp in my calf since last week.
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