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12 mar 2017
- Polacco
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Inglese (Regno Unito)
Domande Inglese (Regno Unito)
Dear XYZ!
How are fhings? Thanks for you reply. I'm truly sorry I haven't written for such a long time but I was pretty busy. Now, I'd like to drop you a line about my latest news. I would like to tell you about my new summer job. I got information about this job from my mom, today. I gives the flyer for various shops. I'm planning to go for a walk with my dog and go to the cinema this weekend. And you? I'm looking forward to hearing form you as soon as possible. Write soon,
Yours, XYZ sembra naturale?
Dear XYZ!
How are fhings? Thanks for you reply. I'm truly sorry I haven't written for such a long time but I was pretty busy. Now, I'd like to drop you a line about my latest news. I would like to tell you about my new summer job. I got information about this job from my mom, today. I gives the flyer for various shops. I'm planning to go for a walk with my dog and go to the cinema this weekend. And you? I'm looking forward to hearing form you as soon as possible. Write soon,
Yours, XYZ sembra naturale?
How are fhings? Thanks for you reply. I'm truly sorry I haven't written for such a long time but I was pretty busy. Now, I'd like to drop you a line about my latest news. I would like to tell you about my new summer job. I got information about this job from my mom, today. I gives the flyer for various shops. I'm planning to go for a walk with my dog and go to the cinema this weekend. And you? I'm looking forward to hearing form you as soon as possible. Write soon,
Yours, XYZ sembra naturale?
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- Polacco
Un po' strano
1. "Thanks for your reply"
2. "Now, I'd like to drop you a line about my latest news. I would like to tell you about my new summer job." Oba te zdania w sumie oznaczają to samo. Albo usuń to pierwsze, albo je zmodyfikuj tak aby informacja o nowej pracy się w nim znalazła.
3. "I've got information about this job from my mom today."
4. "I gives the flyer for various shops." zastąp zdaniem "I'm going to give fliers out for various shops".
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- Polacco
@momokyubei Now, I'd like to drop you a line about my latest news about my new summer job. jest ok?
- Polacco
Un po' strano
"Now, I'd like to drop you a line about my new summer job" jak już
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- Polacco
@momokyubei 3. "I've got information about this job from my mom today." bo w tym mailu musze miec punkt skąd mam informację o tej pracy, masz pomysł jak to zdanie jakoś dobrze napisać?
- Polacco
Un po' strano
no to w sumie tak, najlepiej zamień to zdanie na jakieś inne, prostsze, dla przykładu - "My mom told me about this job today" albo "I've heard about it from my mom"
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- Polacco
@momokyubei bardzo dziękuję za pomoc ;D
- Inglese (Regno Unito)
Un po' strano
(Only a very little unnatural.)
How are things ? I'm truly sorry that I haven't written for such a long time, but I have been pretty busy. Now I would like to tell you about my latest news. It is about my new summer job. I got the information about this job from my mum today. I will be giving out fliers for various shops. I'm planning to go for a walk with my dog and go to the cinema this weekend. And you ? I'm looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Write soon,
Yours,
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