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2 ott 2021
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Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Domande Inglese (Stati Uniti)
"I ordered a French vanilla scented Yankee candle on amazon for my birthday. I’m looking forward to receiving it. I really like the smell because it reminds me of the days I lived in America. It was a bit expensive, but it’s OK. My birth is worth the price."
Hello! I'm sorry the passage is rather long, but could you please read it and let me know if the sentences in it sound natural? Thank you in advance.
"I ordered a French vanilla scented Yankee candle on amazon for my birthday. I’m looking forward to receiving it. I really like the smell because it reminds me of the days I lived in America. It was a bit expensive, but it’s OK. My birth is worth the price."
Hello! I'm sorry the passage is rather long, but could you please read it and let me know if the sentences in it sound natural? Thank you in advance.
Hello! I'm sorry the passage is rather long, but could you please read it and let me know if the sentences in it sound natural? Thank you in advance.
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2 ott 2021
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It sounds natural 😊👍
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