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There is a serial killer, psychopath. He kills her(Daphe's) mom.
He stand in court as a suspect. But the court bring in a verdict of not proven.
So Liam proves his superpower in the court and also proves that the psychopath is serial killer. sembra naturale?
He stand in court as a suspect. But the court bring in a verdict of not proven.
So Liam proves his superpower in the court and also proves that the psychopath is serial killer. sembra naturale?
Un po' strano
There is a serial killer, a psychopath. He kills her(Daphe's) mom.
He stand in court as a suspect but the verdict is not guilty due to lack of evidence.
Liam uses his superpower in the courtroom to prove that the psychopath is serial killer.
I couldn't really change the beginning since the context is not clear . You can say the part about court 2 ways :
The verdict was not guilty
or
The jury(or judge) ruled not guilty
I would also avoid starting a new sentence with 'So'. It is usually in the middle of a sentence or thought as a way of bringing a conclusion to something said before.
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Un po' strano
There is a serial killer, a psychopath. He kills her(Daphe's) mom.
He stand in court as a suspect but the verdict is not guilty due to lack of evidence.
Liam uses his superpower in the courtroom to prove that the psychopath is serial killer.
I couldn't really change the beginning since the context is not clear . You can say the part about court 2 ways :
The verdict was not guilty
or
The jury(or judge) ruled not guilty
I would also avoid starting a new sentence with 'So'. It is usually in the middle of a sentence or thought as a way of bringing a conclusion to something said before.
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- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
"There's a psychopathic serial killer that killed Daphe's mother. Standing in court as a suspect, but the verdict was proven not guilty. So Liam uses his supernatural abilities to prove, he was the killer."
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