- Giapponese
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Inglese (Stati Uniti)
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Francese (Francia)
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Tedesco
(Part One)
A Very Special Day
Let this evening be an exception
For your own good
I'm gonna make it up with you, my darling
It's White X'mas beyond the window out there
Which is getting the best situation ready for me
The glittering town where you live
It's a colorful prism
The Love Love Train is carrying me to you
Harry Up！
Can't lose a second 'cause I wanna see you soonest
Silent Night Holy Night
My thoughts for you get growing little by little
Like falling snow onto the ground
The moment you show up
The World will change
Glory Night
So Chu Chu Ru Ru Ru
Work magic of love on me！
Behave ' Just The Way You Are '
As this is a special evening
I'll hide that stubborn myself in the snow
A bit more patience and Santa Clause's giving me the biggest present
A town of winter wind where you're waiting for me
My heartbeats are getting faster
A Gift To You in my cold hands
I've set my Make Up to look a bit more lovely
To be honest to you
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sembra naturale?
A Very Special Day
Let this evening be an exception
For your own good
I'm gonna make it up with you, my darling
It's White X'mas beyond the window out there
Which is getting the best situation ready for me
The glittering town where you live
It's a colorful prism
The Love Love Train is carrying me to you
Harry Up！
Can't lose a second 'cause I wanna see you soonest
Silent Night Holy Night
My thoughts for you get growing little by little
Like falling snow onto the ground
The moment you show up
The World will change
Glory Night
So Chu Chu Ru Ru Ru
Work magic of love on me！
Behave ' Just The Way You Are '
As this is a special evening
I'll hide that stubborn myself in the snow
A bit more patience and Santa Clause's giving me the biggest present
A town of winter wind where you're waiting for me
My heartbeats are getting faster
A Gift To You in my cold hands
I've set my Make Up to look a bit more lovely
To be honest to you
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sembra naturale?
The words in initial capital letters in brackets are from the original lyrics. So, they might look inconsistent or clumsy between the sentenses. But, such words can suddenly pop out in the lyrics, I'd say.
Please check if the words are grammatically used or if the setences make you feel natural or not.
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Non naturale
(Part One)
A Very Special Day
Let this evening be an exception
For your own good
I'm gonna make it up with you, my darling
I'm gonna make it up with you, my darling
It's a White X'mas beyond the window out there
It's a White X'mas beyond the window out there
Which is getting the best situation ready for me (I don’t understand this)
Which is getting the best situation ready for me (I don’t understand this)
The glitteringglistening town where you live
The glitteringglistening town where you live
It's a colorful prism
The Love Love Train is carrying me to you
HarryHurry Up！
HarryHurry Up！
Can't lose a second 'cause I wanna see you soonestas soon as possible
Can't lose a second 'cause I wanna see you soonestas soon as possible
Silent Night Holy Night
My thoughts for you get growing little by little
My thoughts for you get growing little by little
Like falling snow onto the ground
The moment you show up
The World will change
Glory Night
So Chu Chu Ru Ru Ru
Work magic of love on me！
Work magic of love on me！
Behave ' Just The Way You Are '
As this is a special evening
I'll hide thatmy stubborn myselfself in the snow
I'll hide thatmy stubborn myselfself in the snow
A bit more patience and Santa Clause'sis giving me the biggest present
A bit more patience and Santa Clause'sis giving me the biggest present
A town of winter wind where you're waiting for me
My heartbeatsheartbeat areis getting faster
My heartbeatsheartbeat areis getting faster
A Gift To You in my cold hands
I've set my Make Up to look a bit more lovely
To be honest to you
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- Giapponese
The subject girl is going to see her boyfriend. She thinks that this situation (scene or circumstances) surrounded by white snow (dating with him in the white world ) is very romantic.
So, the lyric says that snow is making me the best stage for dating.
I'd be happy if you check above phrase again.
- Giapponese
Un po' strano
(Part One)
A Very Special Day
LetMay this evening be an exceptionexceptional
LetMay this evening be an exceptionexceptional
For your own good
I'm gonna make it upjust with for you, my darling
I'm gonna make it upjust with for you, my darling
It'sBeyond Whitethe Xwindow, there'mass beyonda thewhite window out thereChristmas
It'sBeyond Whitethe Xwindow, there'mass beyonda thewhite window out thereChristmas
Which iscreates getting the best situationbackdrop, ready for me
Which iscreates getting the best situationbackdrop, ready for me
The glittering town where you live
It's a colorful prism
The Love Love Train is carrying me to you
HarryHurry Up！
HarryHurry Up！
Can't lose a second 'cause I wanna see you at the soonest
Can't lose a second 'cause I wanna see you at the soonest
Silent Night Holy Night
My thoughts for you get growing little by little
My thoughts for you get growing little by little
Like falling snow onto the ground
The moment you show up
The World will change
Glory Night
So Chu Chu Ru Ru Ru
Work the magic of love on me！
Work the magic of love on me！
Behave ' Just The Way You Are '
As this is a special evening
I'll hide thatmy stubborn myselfself in the snow
I'll hide thatmy stubborn myselfself in the snow
A bit more patience and Santa Clause's giving me the biggest presentgift
A bit more patience and Santa Clause's giving me the biggest presentgift
A town of winter wind where you're waiting for me
My heartbeats are getting faster
A Gift To You in my cold hands
I've setmade my Make Up to look a bit more lovely
I've setmade my Make Up to look a bit more lovely
To be honest to you
Questa risposta ti è stata d'aiuto?
- Giapponese
I've got a few more questions. Would you kindly answer as well？
- Giapponese
So, your first correctoin Let ⇒May She says, "I will make this evening an exception. And I'll see you for your sake. This is for your good. Thank me." She's not praying or wishing at least in words despite her mind. So, how about "I'll make this evening an exception for you." or the original "Let this evening be an exception"
- Giapponese
Background: Somehow they stayed away due to quarrels or dispures, and they are meeting today. She"s going to shake hands and be friends or lovers again.
So, the second one "make it up with you"
= become peaceful. I'd feel "make it just for you" sounds a bit different. I need your reply.
- Giapponese
Please suppose you are on the train like this girl. Snowing outside. Don't you say to your friend beside you, "Look！It's a white X'mas outside." This is my original verse. Or, is it unnatural？
- Giapponese
I'd really be grateful if you answer above questions.
- Giapponese
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