Hi!
I’m wondering if this sounds natural or not.
Can you tell me if there is any room for improvement?

It would be really helpful if you could answer this question! Thank you in advance :)


“I’ve always wanted this book, but it’s kind of expensive for me. So I’d given up getting it a while ago. But with you guys’ help, I was finally able to get this book.(and my favorite ice cream for comfort, too)
I just can’t thank you guys enough.
Not just about donation, but about you always being there for me to cheer me up. It means the world to me.
Thank you so so much.
I’m going to use this book to the fullest!
I promise!”