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23 feb 2022
- Coreano
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Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Domande Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Please somebody rescue me!!!! I'm in a desperate situation, and I want to know rather this letter is polite and formal or not. I really need help!!!omg~~~~😱😱😱Thank you
Hi. I’m @@@, studying software engineering in @@@ University in Seoul.
I took the liberty of e-mailing you to make a request about a criterion of student exchange program for a first semester of 2022.
Normally, only those who go abroad to study take IELTS exam in Korea, so I just
got a band score 6.5 and over 6 in each section by referring to a previous
application criteria(band score 6.5, over 6 in each section)from DGU homepage.
In case of a student exchange program for the first semester(August-November) in
2022, however, requires higher score (band score 7) than before, and I’m unqualified for it.
So, will it be difficult to re-adjust the current criteria for the application?
I know that my request is hard to be accepted and far-fetched, but this is my last chance that I can apply for the program since I’m a senior now. Plus, if I knew that I needed higher score for the application, I would have devoted more time and effort so that I can get a better score.
I’m sorry to trouble you, but I’ve been eager to study in a prestigious university like SMU and I really long for it. I appreciate you for reading my e-mail.
From @@@
@@@ University in Seoul
Please somebody rescue me!!!! I'm in a desperate situation, and I want to know rather this letter is polite and formal or not. I really need help!!!omg~~~~😱😱😱Thank you
Hi. I’m @@@, studying software engineering in @@@ University in Seoul.
I took the liberty of e-mailing you to make a request about a criterion of student exchange program for a first semester of 2022.
Normally, only those who go abroad to study take IELTS exam in Korea, so I just
got a band score 6.5 and over 6 in each section by referring to a previous
application criteria(band score 6.5, over 6 in each section)from DGU homepage.
In case of a student exchange program for the first semester(August-November) in
2022, however, requires higher score (band score 7) than before, and I’m unqualified for it.
So, will it be difficult to re-adjust the current criteria for the application?
I know that my request is hard to be accepted and far-fetched, but this is my last chance that I can apply for the program since I’m a senior now. Plus, if I knew that I needed higher score for the application, I would have devoted more time and effort so that I can get a better score.
I’m sorry to trouble you, but I’ve been eager to study in a prestigious university like SMU and I really long for it. I appreciate you for reading my e-mail.
From @@@
@@@ University in Seoul
Hi. I’m @@@, studying software engineering in @@@ University in Seoul.
I took the liberty of e-mailing you to make a request about a criterion of student exchange program for a first semester of 2022.
Normally, only those who go abroad to study take IELTS exam in Korea, so I just
got a band score 6.5 and over 6 in each section by referring to a previous
application criteria(band score 6.5, over 6 in each section)from DGU homepage.
In case of a student exchange program for the first semester(August-November) in
2022, however, requires higher score (band score 7) than before, and I’m unqualified for it.
So, will it be difficult to re-adjust the current criteria for the application?
I know that my request is hard to be accepted and far-fetched, but this is my last chance that I can apply for the program since I’m a senior now. Plus, if I knew that I needed higher score for the application, I would have devoted more time and effort so that I can get a better score.
I’m sorry to trouble you, but I’ve been eager to study in a prestigious university like SMU and I really long for it. I appreciate you for reading my e-mail.
From @@@
@@@ University in Seoul
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- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Hi, I’m @@@, studying software engineering at @@@ University in Seoul.
I took the liberty of emailing you to make a request about a criterion of the student exchange program for the first semester of 2022.
Normally, only those who go abroad to study take the IELTS exam in Korea, so I got a band score of 6.5 and over 6 in each section by referring to the previous application criteria (band score 6.5, over 6 in each section) from DGU’s homepage.
In the case of the student exchange program for the first semester (August-November) in 2022, however, a higher score is required than before (band score 7), and I’m unqualified for it.
So, would it be at all possible to readjust the current criteria for the application?
I understand that my request may be hard to accommodate, but this is my last opportunity to apply for the program since I’m a senior now. If I had known that I needed a higher score for the application, I would have devoted additional time and effort to ensure I got the required score.
I’m sorry to trouble you, but I’ve been eager to study at a prestigious university like SMU, and I really long for it. I appreciate you reading my email.
From @@@
@@@ University in Seoul
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Here are my suggested changes. I made some minor edits throughout, but the second-to-last paragraph (beginning with “So, …”) is where I made the main changes.
Wishing you the best of luck! I hope they accept your request!🤞
Utente esperto
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