Question
Aggiornato il
30 gen 2023
- Coreano
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Inglese (Stati Uniti)
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Inglese (Regno Unito)
Domande Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Could you please help with my writing🌷
I’d like to make them sound as natural as possible!
You can totally rephrase the sentence is if you like🥹
1. Since I’m the tallest one in our office, I had to step on a chair to plug the electric heater in the ceiling socket. There was a little struggle, but I made it.
2. At the end of the day, my boss cried out in the bathroom, saying “Water is working, there’s water” Finally the pipes thawed out.
3. Two boxes of pizza were delivered from the head office. Everyone got excited, but for some reason, no one wanted to eat more than one piece. I suppose they are all worried about getting fat. I reluctantly took another piece of pizza and decided to skip dinner. What a shame.
4. It’s pretty easy to walk 10K steps on weekdays but on the weekend it’s going to be a totally different story.
5. Tomorrow I’ll have to leave for work early because it’s my turn to open the office gate.
6. I have an unexplainable gut feeling that I will find the love of my life this year.
Could you please help with my writing🌷
I’d like to make them sound as natural as possible!
You can totally rephrase the sentence is if you like🥹
1. Since I’m the tallest one in our office, I had to step on a chair to plug the electric heater in the ceiling socket. There was a little struggle, but I made it.
2. At the end of the day, my boss cried out in the bathroom, saying “Water is working, there’s water” Finally the pipes thawed out.
3. Two boxes of pizza were delivered from the head office. Everyone got excited, but for some reason, no one wanted to eat more than one piece. I suppose they are all worried about getting fat. I reluctantly took another piece of pizza and decided to skip dinner. What a shame.
4. It’s pretty easy to walk 10K steps on weekdays but on the weekend it’s going to be a totally different story.
5. Tomorrow I’ll have to leave for work early because it’s my turn to open the office gate.
6. I have an unexplainable gut feeling that I will find the love of my life this year.
I’d like to make them sound as natural as possible!
You can totally rephrase the sentence is if you like🥹
1. Since I’m the tallest one in our office, I had to step on a chair to plug the electric heater in the ceiling socket. There was a little struggle, but I made it.
2. At the end of the day, my boss cried out in the bathroom, saying “Water is working, there’s water” Finally the pipes thawed out.
3. Two boxes of pizza were delivered from the head office. Everyone got excited, but for some reason, no one wanted to eat more than one piece. I suppose they are all worried about getting fat. I reluctantly took another piece of pizza and decided to skip dinner. What a shame.
4. It’s pretty easy to walk 10K steps on weekdays but on the weekend it’s going to be a totally different story.
5. Tomorrow I’ll have to leave for work early because it’s my turn to open the office gate.
6. I have an unexplainable gut feeling that I will find the love of my life this year.
Risposte
30 gen 2023
Domanda in primo piano
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
1. Since I’m the tallest one in our office, I had to step on a chair to plug the electric heater (into) the ceiling socket. (It was a little bit of a) struggle, but I made it.
2. At the end of the day, my boss cried out (from) the bathroom, saying, “Water is working, there’s water!” Finally the pipes (had) thawed out.
3. Two boxes of pizza were delivered from the head office. Everyone got excited, but for some reason, no one wanted to eat more than one piece. I suppose they (were) all worried about getting fat. I reluctantly took another piece of pizza and decided to skip dinner. What a shame.
4. It’s pretty easy to walk 10K steps on weekdays, but on the weekend it’s going to be a totally different story.
Just a couple of thoughts. I added a couple of commas, and some word changes that I put in parentheses. Great job, though!
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