Question
Aggiornato il
31 gen 2016
- Giapponese
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Inglese (Stati Uniti)
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Spagnolo (Spagna)
Domande Inglese (Stati Uniti)
There are millions of children who suffer from hanger in the world. sembra naturale?
There are millions of children who suffer from hanger in the world. sembra naturale?
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31 gen 2016
Domanda in primo piano
- Inglese (Regno Unito)
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Naturale
Although that all makes sense, I recommend taking out the "in the world" part. It gives the sentence an uncomfortable ending feeling. I believe the reason for this uncomfortable feeling is because the phrase "in the world" isn't necessary at all.
Why isn't it necessary then?
ALL humans live in a world called "Earth" right? That's the answer. Everyone knows that children (no matter what race) live in a world so theoretically your stating the obvious (unless you want to emphasise that these children aren't aliens).
"There are millions of children who suffer from hunger" is a better way of putting it.
Also, I believe you made a spelling mistake. I'm not sure how you mistyped "hunger" for "hanger" as the distance between the letter "a" and "u" is quite far, but I just want you to know that these words are completely different.
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- Inglese (Regno Unito)
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Naturale
Although that all makes sense, I recommend taking out the "in the world" part. It gives the sentence an uncomfortable ending feeling. I believe the reason for this uncomfortable feeling is because the phrase "in the world" isn't necessary at all.
Why isn't it necessary then?
ALL humans live in a world called "Earth" right? That's the answer. Everyone knows that children (no matter what race) live in a world so theoretically your stating the obvious (unless you want to emphasise that these children aren't aliens).
"There are millions of children who suffer from hunger" is a better way of putting it.
Also, I believe you made a spelling mistake. I'm not sure how you mistyped "hunger" for "hanger" as the distance between the letter "a" and "u" is quite far, but I just want you to know that these words are completely different.
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