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I need some help with my writing, someone who can correct my essay please? I promise to help you with Spanish. Thousands of thanks.

Every country in the world has problems with pollution and damage to the enviroment.
Do you think these problems can be solved?
Nowadays all the developed countries have many problems with pollution, traffic, noise, rubbish… We live in a world where human beings are only worried aboute theirselves and their images. And we don´t realize we live in a planet which need be cared if we want our grand children will heritage it.
Firstly I want to talk about the pollution which is produced by any method of method of transport and factories. Our atmosphere welcomes thousands of emissions of C02 each day due to the gases throwing. This fact is affected millions of people who can breath well in some huge cities as “Los Angeles”, “New York”, “Barcelona” or “Madrid”.
For those reasons, some goverments are decided to find a solution to this problem which has been to reduce the vehicle transport in the cities centre.
Seconly we have a serious problem with the rubbish, human beings make tons of rubbish every years, these scraps flows into the seas and oceans. As a result of these many acuatic animals die every day. In addition some species of animals are starting to become extinct.
I think it is posible to reduce the amount of rubbish and pollution we make daily, we can start to use renewable energies like solar panels, take the public transport instead our own car or throw rubbish in the containers.
To sum up human beings should care more our planet, work hard in environmental education and be aware our children to look for the Earth is a misión of everybody.

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I need some help with my writing, someone who can correct my essay please? I promise to help you with Spanish. Thousands of thanks.

Every country in the world has problems with pollution and damage to the enviroment. 
Do you think these problems can be solved?
Nowadays all the developed countries have many problems with pollution, traffic, noise, rubbish… We live in a world where human beings are only worried aboute theirselves and their images. And we don´t realize we live in a planet which need be cared if we want our grand children will heritage it.
Firstly I want to talk about the pollution which is produced by any method of method of transport and  factories. Our atmosphere welcomes thousands of emissions of C02 each day due to the gases throwing. This fact is affected millions of people who can breath well in some huge cities as “Los Angeles”, “New York”, “Barcelona” or “Madrid”.
For those reasons, some goverments are decided to find a solution to this problem which has been to reduce the vehicle transport in the cities centre.
Seconly we have a serious problem with the rubbish, human beings make tons of rubbish every years, these scraps flows into the seas and oceans. As a result of these many acuatic animals die every day. In addition some species of animals are starting to become extinct.
I think it is posible to reduce the amount of rubbish and pollution we make daily, we can start to use renewable energies like solar panels, take the public transport instead our own car or throw rubbish in the containers.
To sum up human beings should care more our planet, work hard in environmental education and be aware our children to look for the Earth is a misión of everybody.
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