- Giapponese
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Inglese (Regno Unito)
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Spagnolo (Spagna)
I stepped into the hallway to look for her, but there was no one about. I felt lonly and helpless slowly. In a short while I felt as if I had been tempted into a different world with the fantastic ambience. Since a little while ago, the scent of flower was wafting from nowhere. In due course I felt as if I forgot myself and I didn't know what I was doing here. sembra naturale?
- Inglese (Regno Unito)
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
I stepped into the hallway to look for her, but there was no one about. I felt lonely and helpless. In a moment I felt as if I had been tempted into a different world by a fantastic ambience. Since a short time before, the scent of flowers wafted as if from nowhere. In a while I felt as if I forgot myself and didn't know what I was doing there.
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- Giapponese
I stepped into the hallway to look for her, but there was no one about. I gradually felt lonely and helpless. And I felt as if I had been tempted into a different world with the fantastic ambience. Since then, the scent of flower was wafting from nowhere. In due course I felt as if I forgot myself and I didn't know what I was doing here.
- Giapponese
I made a misspelling, "lonely" is correct.
Following "as if ", is it OK, if there is not a (S+V) in stead of a phrase?
Only a phrase can be used following "as if", Correct?
- Inglese (Regno Unito)
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
@chamanico It doesn't need to be a phrase. You could say "~as if enchanted." Or something like that.
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"I stepped into the hallway to look for her, but there was no one about. I gradually felt lonely and helpless. And I felt as if I had been tempted into a different world with fantastic ambience. Since then, the scent of a flower was wafting from nowhere. In due course I felt as if I forgot myself and I didn't know what I was doing there."
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