A Virus is like a human virus.The computer can get infected by a virus, if the user open wrong Programms.The Virus can make his own configuration and start network services. These Network services allow a hacker to sniff data of the user. sembra naturale?

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mlpiotro · Answer

A virus is like a human virus. The computer can get infected by a virus if the user opens the wrong programs. The virus can make its own configuration and start network services. These network services allow a hacker to find data about the user.

You don't have to capitalize virus or network unless there is a specific name for them.

You don't have to capitalize virus or network unless there is a specific name for them.

ShadowDragonsHeart · Answer

Try something more like "A virus is like a human virus. A computer can get infected with a virus if the user opens an infected program. Viruses can sometimes make their own configurations, and start networking services. These network services allow a hacker to read any data that the user has on his/her computer."

It's pretty good, I understood what you ment. The "sniff" part can be correct, but it is a little informal compared to the rest of the paragraph. It could still be used though.

It's pretty good, I understood what you ment. The "sniff" part can be correct, but it is a little informal compared to the rest of the paragraph. It could still be used though.