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19 apr 2016
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It is first important to realize that supporting space research can accelerate the development of green technologies. Many of the products or designs that were supposed to be used for rockets or satellites have been commercialized and helped us to lead a sustainable lifestyle. Take solar panels for example, they were designed to sustain the operation of satellites in the dark space but now we install tens of millions of solar panels to generate electricity on earth. In this case, a small amount of public funds, which were aimed to serve the space research in one specific field finally led to the general use of clean energy all over the world, and this means that space research not only expand our terrority in space but also enables us to make the best use of resources on earth. sembra naturale?
It is first important to realize that supporting space research can accelerate the development of green technologies. Many of the products or designs that were supposed to be used for rockets or satellites have been commercialized and helped us to lead a sustainable lifestyle. Take solar panels for example, they were designed to sustain the operation of satellites in the dark space but now we install tens of millions of solar panels to generate electricity on earth. In this case, a small amount of public funds, which were aimed to serve the space research in one specific field finally led to the general use of clean energy all over the world, and this means that space research not only expand our terrority in space but also enables us to make the best use of resources on earth. sembra naturale?
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19 apr 2016
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Naturale
This sounds very natural.
Change the comma in "Take solar panels for example," into a period. It's a complete sentence.
Change "expand" to "expands"
Otherwise, really good!
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- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
- Spagnolo (Messico) Quasi esperto
Naturale
This sounds very natural.
Change the comma in "Take solar panels for example," into a period. It's a complete sentence.
Change "expand" to "expands"
Otherwise, really good!
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