Could you correct the passages below?

I like Akira Ikegami’s news explanation serious. He is a free journalist and He is featured on various television programs and wrote numerous books.

In his TV program, he explains a wide range of news such as politics, economics, international affairs, environmental problems. The most obvious feature of his explanation is that he's way of accounting the news is easy to understand. As a result, I the audience understand easily and can gain an in-depth understanding. Additionally, he usually asks politicians a pointed question that is difficult to answer for them. Nowadays, in Japan, some medias and media persons don’t ask such questions because they are afraid of the pressure from the government. However, he bravely asks such questions for major politicians.

The reason why I like his TV program is that I can understand many kinds of easily and deeply. Also, I am interested in social science so his TV program gives me a beneficial knowledge which is related with my curiosity.

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Could you correct the passages below?

I like Akira Ikegami’s news explanation serious. He is a free journalist and He is featured on various television programs and wrote numerous books.

In his TV program, he explains a wide range of news such as politics, economics, international affairs, environmental problems. The most obvious feature of his explanation is that he's way of accounting the news is easy to understand. As a result, I the audience understand easily and can gain an in-depth understanding. Additionally, he usually asks politicians a pointed question that is difficult to answer for them. Nowadays, in Japan, some medias and media persons don’t ask such questions because they are afraid of the pressure from the government. However, he bravely asks such questions for major politicians. 

The reason why I like his TV program is that I can understand many kinds of easily and deeply. Also, I am interested in social science so his TV program gives me a beneficial knowledge which is related with my curiosity.

lizzzyy · Answer

I like Akira Ikegami’s news explanation series. He is a free journalist that has been featured on various television programs and has wrote numerous books.

In his TV program, he explains a wide range of news such as politics, economics, international affairs, environmental problems. The most obvious feature of his explanation is that he's way of accounting the news is easy to understand. As a result, I the audience understand easily and can gain an in-depth understanding. Additionally, he usually asks politicians a pointed question that is difficult to answer for them. Nowadays, in Japan, some medias and media personals don’t ask such questions because they are afraid of the pressure from the government. However, he bravely asks such questions to major politicians. 

The reason why I like his TV program is that I can understand the news, easily and deeply. Also, I am interested in social science so his TV program gives me a beneficial knowledge which is related with my curiosity.

mrosie3677 · Answer

I like Akira Ikegami’s news explanation seriously. He is a free journalist.   He was featured on various television programs and wrote numerous books.

In his TV program, he explained a wide range of news such as politics, economics, international affairs and environmental problems. The most obvious featured  explanation was the way he accounted the news. It was easy to understand. As an audience I understood it easily and gained an in-depth understanding. In Addition, he usually asks politicians a pointed question that is difficult for them to answer. Nowadays, in Japan, some media and media personalities don’t ask such questions because they are afraid of the pressure from the government. However, Due to he's braveness such questions was asked to the politicians.

The reason why I liked his TV program was that I can easily understand  the topic that was being discussed.  I am interested in social science thus, his TV program will benefit  my curiosity.

nohamsa · Answer

Your passages are really good!!!!! :)

There are just a few minor changes I would make.

Firstly, I think that the first sentence doesn't sound natural. I think you either meant to say, "I seriously like Akira Ikegami's news explanations" (meaning that you really like them) or you could have meant "I like Akira Ikegami's news explanation series" (meaning that it is not a movie, it has several episodes).

Next, I think that you should change "he is featured on various television programs" to "he was featured on various television programs". This is because firstly, I think that the action of him being featured happened in the past. It also sounds awkward if you were to say it like that in speech because the tenses aren't consistent.

Next, I think you should change "he explains a wide range of news" to "he explains a wide range of news topics".

I also think you should change "he's way of accounting the news" to "his way of explaining the news" or "his way of interpreting the news." The reason why you should change "he's" to "his" is because "he's" is incorrect because it is a contraction. "He's" actually means "he is". It is incorrect to use "he is" in that situation because you are talking about something he possesses, which is a way of accounting. Thus, you would use "his." You would use "his way of explaining the news" if you are talking about his explanation being easy to understand. However, if you mean that his ideas are easy to sympathize with or to agree with, you would say "his way of interpreting the news."

Also, I don't think that you should say "I the audience" because the audience is not just you. You are a part of the audience. If you want to talk about just how you personally understand, you can say "I understand easily." If you want to generalize it more and talk about many people, you can say "the audience understands easily."

Besides this, I think that  saying " he usually asks politicians a pointed question that is difficult to answer for them" sounds unnatural. You can change it to "he usually asks politicians questions that they find difficult to answer" or "he usually asks politicians challenging questions that they find difficult to answer" or "he confronts politicians by asking them questions that they find difficult/hard/challenging to answer."

I also think you should change "media persons" to "media personalities. "

I think that you should change "social science" to "social sciences" because social science is not just one subject  and because there are a variety of social sciences like anthropology, psychology, sociology, etc.

I think you should remove the "a" before "beneficial knowledge" so that it becomes "his TV program gives me beneficial knowledge." This is because "knowledge" is an uncountable object, so you can't use "a".

Lastly, I think you should change the order of the sentence "I am interested in social sciences so his TV program gives me  beneficial knowledge which is related with my curiosity" to "I am interested in social sciences so his TV program helps satisfy my curiosity by giving me beneficial knowledge." This sounds more natural and makes more sense because similar information in a sentence should be together, and new information should come later. The part about you being interested in social sciences as well as the part about your curiosity are similar pieces of information, because they have to do with what you like or what you are interested in. The part about the TV program being beneficial is a new piece of information which explains how it is related to your curiosity and interest in social sciences. Thus, it should come later in the sentence and not in between the two similar pieces of information.

However, your English is really good!!!!! :) You only had a few minor mistakes, but I'm sure in a little bit, you will be perfect! I tried to learn Japanese, but I'm still finding it difficult to learn the different writing systems. However, you can speak English fluently!!!! Good job! :)

clarity13 · Answer

社会科学に興味がある人として、私は楽しんでいます
池上明の解説と分析
彼はとても有益です。 フリー・ジャーナリスト、著者
誰がテレビで上映されるのか。

彼のテレビ番組では、複雑な話題や話を簡素化する
政治、経済、国際問題、そして
環境問題を理解しやすくしています。
彼は政治家に挑戦することを恐れることはないが、
メディアの多くが厳しい質問をしなくなったという事実
政府の報復を恐れて
_______________
As someone who is interested in the social sciences, I enjoy
Akira Ikegami’s commentary and analysis on the news because
he is so informative. He is a freelance journalist and author
who is often featured on television.

On his TV show, he simplifies complex topics and stories 
within politics, economics, international affairs, and 
environmental problems, making them easy to understand. 
He is not afraid to ask challenging of politicians, despite the
fact that many in the media no longer ask the tough questions
for fear of government reprisal.

verosof · Answer

"I am a big fan of Akira Ikegami’s news program. He is a free journalist who has been featured on various television programs and who has written numerous books.

In his TV program, Ikegami explains a wide range of topics, including politics, economics, international affairs, and environmental problems. His greatest strength as a presenter is that his way of presenting current affairs is easy to understand. As a result viewers can easily grasp the in-depth information he presents. Additionally, he usually asks politicians pointed questions that are difficult for them to answer. Nowadays in Japan, it is uncommon for people in the media to ask such direct questions because they are afraid of receiving pressure from the government. However, Ikegami is unafraid to confront his interviewees and demand the truth from them.

Lastly, I am also interested in social sciences so his TV program offers me a great deal of beneficial knowledge related to that."

SortaSpeakSpanish · Answer

like Akira Ikegami’s news explanations. He is a free journalist and is featured on various television programs and has written numerous books.

In his TV program, he explains a wide range of news such as politics, economics, international affairs, environmental problems. The most obvious feature of his explanation is that his way of accounting the news is easy to understand. As a result, I the audience understands easily and can gain an in-depth understanding. Additionally, he usually asks politicians pointed questions that are difficult to answer. Nowadays, in Japan, some media persons don’t ask such questions because they are afraid of pressure from the government. However, he bravely asks these questions to major politicians. 

The reason why I like his TV program is that I can understand many kinds of (Kinds of what, information, news?) easily and deeply. Also, I am interested in social science so his TV program gives me a beneficial knowledge that is related to my curiosity.

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