The erudition of the nobility measured their propensity to cite and the game quotes. The main value of the quotation was not verbatim quotes, and the ability to use it in the right situation.
A high level of education and erudition defines the wealth of the speech of the aristocracy, the most common varieties of which are allusions and quotes. The main sources of allusions and quotations are literature, history, philosophy, Proverbs, mythology and the Bible. sembra naturale?

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The erudition of the nobility measured their propensity to cite and the game quotes. The main value of the quotation was not verbatim quotes, and the ability to use it in the right situation.
A high level of education and erudition defines the wealth of the speech of the aristocracy, the most common varieties of which are allusions and quotes. The main sources of allusions and quotations are literature, history, philosophy, Proverbs, mythology and the Bible. sembra naturale?

Briggsy · Answer

okay so, this is one hell of academic read, if it is not for that purpose then I suggest changes some of the words so they aren't so specialised

the first sentence doesn't quite make sense it has to be either...to cite game quotes. or ...to cite and game quote. (in not sure which one you meant there)

in the second sentence you have to mention the main value, not just what is what not

Briggsy · Answer

@IrinaM for an easier to read text, I'd suggest shortening the sentences

@IrinaM for an easier to read text, I'd suggest shortening the sentences

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