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27 set 2017
- Giapponese
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Inglese (Stati Uniti)
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After taking the highway bus, you transfer to a train.
When you get off the bus, you see a station building in front of the bus stop but you shouldn't go into the building.
However it it confusing. There are two railway company buildings and stations near the bus stop.
The station you take next is located the other side of the building.
Please look around from the bus stop. You can find an underpass to get to the other side of the building of another railway company.
When you exit from the underpass, you soon find the next station building there.
It should be noted that you have only 15 minutes to transfer. Please move to the station quickly. sembra naturale?
After taking the highway bus, you transfer to a train.
When you get off the bus, you see a station building in front of the bus stop but you shouldn't go into the building.
However it it confusing. There are two railway company buildings and stations near the bus stop.
The station you take next is located the other side of the building.
Please look around from the bus stop. You can find an underpass to get to the other side of the building of another railway company.
When you exit from the underpass, you soon find the next station building there.
It should be noted that you have only 15 minutes to transfer. Please move to the station quickly. sembra naturale?
When you get off the bus, you see a station building in front of the bus stop but you shouldn't go into the building.
However it it confusing. There are two railway company buildings and stations near the bus stop.
The station you take next is located the other side of the building.
Please look around from the bus stop. You can find an underpass to get to the other side of the building of another railway company.
When you exit from the underpass, you soon find the next station building there.
It should be noted that you have only 15 minutes to transfer. Please move to the station quickly. sembra naturale?
I would like you to change this to more natural and logical English please.
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27 set 2017
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- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
It sounds really good! I could understand everything you said, I just have a couple of corrections:
After you take the highway bus, you will transfer to a train. When you get off the bus, you will see a station building right in front of the bus stop, but do not go into that building.
It is a little confusing but, there are two railway company stations near the bus stop. The station you are looking for is on the other side of the building in front of the bus stop.
From the bus stop, look for an underpass to get to the other side of the building and find the correct train station. The correct train station is right on the other side of the underpass.
Please keep in mind that you will only have 15 minutes to transfer, so you will want to move quickly.
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- Portoghese (Brasile)
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
After your highway bus, you should transfer to a train. Right after you leave the bus station, you will see a train station - that is not the one you should go, there are two of them -, first you need to cross that building through an underpass to get to the otherside of it, and there you will find the right train station.
Beware, you only have about 15 minutes to make this transition. So move quickly
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- Giapponese
@torus
Nice to meet you, torus.
I really thank you for correcting my sentences.
I made many mistakes but I will learn natural English hard.
Nice to meet you, torus.
I really thank you for correcting my sentences.
I made many mistakes but I will learn natural English hard.
- Portoghese (Brasile)
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
@dorome I understood what you meant, it is hard wording some instructions without a map, just keep it simple with clear instructions,
Good luck and hard work!
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- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
@torus
This sounds fine but it should be "that is not the one you should go on" or "that is not the one you should get on"
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- Portoghese (Brasile)
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
@torus
It would sound even better is you said
Don't get on that one.
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- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
It sounds really good! I could understand everything you said, I just have a couple of corrections:
After you take the highway bus, you will transfer to a train. When you get off the bus, you will see a station building right in front of the bus stop, but do not go into that building.
It is a little confusing but, there are two railway company stations near the bus stop. The station you are looking for is on the other side of the building in front of the bus stop.
From the bus stop, look for an underpass to get to the other side of the building and find the correct train station. The correct train station is right on the other side of the underpass.
Please keep in mind that you will only have 15 minutes to transfer, so you will want to move quickly.
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- Giapponese
@mkerr
My sentences were long but you corrected. I really thank you.
My sentences were long but you corrected. I really thank you.
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Un po' strano
@dorome no problem! If you have time, could you answer some of my questions? https://hinative.com/en-US/questions/5001515
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