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6 nov 2017
- Russo
- Ucraino
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Inglese (Stati Uniti)
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Tedesco
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Giapponese
Domanda chiusa
Domande Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Come si dice in Inglese (Stati Uniti)? Can you check the text?
Come si dice in Inglese (Stati Uniti)? Can you check the text?
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6 nov 2017
Domanda in primo piano
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Okay, here's the fully edited text:
"Her name is Sasha, and we are the same age. We started our friendship when we were children. I can honestly say that she is beautiful, smart, and a hard-working girl. We trust each other so much that we share some personal secrets just between us. I can always tell her about my problems, and she will give me a piece of good advice. What about her hobbies? Sasha has a talent for writing. She likes writing some long and short stories. I think that in the future, she will become a great writer. Sasha does not have much free time, but when she does, she spends it with her friends. When I hang out with her, we usually watch films or tv series together and then discuss them. I enjoy talking to her a lot, especially because she knows many interesting facts about it all. She is also fond of reading. Books have become an important part of her life. So, to conclude, Sasha is a great person, and I'm very happy to have such a good friend."
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- Russo
- Ucraino
- Russo
- Ucraino
I’m not a very sociable person in real life. The most of people, with who I have relationship are internet friends. But today I’d like to tell you about my friend in real life. Her name is Sasha and we are coeval. We started our friendship, when we was children. I can say, that she is beautiful, smart and hardworking girl. We trust each other so much, that we have some personal secrets. I always can tell her about my problems and she would give me a piece of good advice. What about her hobbies? Sasha has talent in writing. She like writing some big or short stories. I think, that in future she will be a good writer. Sasha does not have much free time but if she has, she spend it with her friends. When I hangout with her, we usually watch films or cereals together and then discuss them. I enjoy talking to her a lot, because she nows many interesting facts about all. She is found of reading. Books have become part and parcel of her life.
So, Sasha is a great person and I’m happy to have such a good friend, as she.
So, Sasha is a great person and I’m happy to have such a good friend, as she.
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
I actually had to look up the word ‘coeval’ as I had never heard/read it before... It’s not incorrect, but it would be much more natural to just say “we are the same age”.
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- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Okay, here's the fully edited text:
"Her name is Sasha, and we are the same age. We started our friendship when we were children. I can honestly say that she is beautiful, smart, and a hard-working girl. We trust each other so much that we share some personal secrets just between us. I can always tell her about my problems, and she will give me a piece of good advice. What about her hobbies? Sasha has a talent for writing. She likes writing some long and short stories. I think that in the future, she will become a great writer. Sasha does not have much free time, but when she does, she spends it with her friends. When I hang out with her, we usually watch films or tv series together and then discuss them. I enjoy talking to her a lot, especially because she knows many interesting facts about it all. She is also fond of reading. Books have become an important part of her life. So, to conclude, Sasha is a great person, and I'm very happy to have such a good friend."
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