Now I’m writing an application form for company I would like to work for. Could you please correct my essay below if you find any mistakes? Thank you for your cooperation!
I want the Japanese economy to develop further and I want to contribute to that. To do that, we need a global financial strategy. Because Japan can not earn money by trade, earn with investment, domestic market is shrinking and it is necessary to fight in world market. I believe that you can make a big contribution by providing know-how and global products that were active in your global market and I applied. But Japan has a careful culture at risk. I would like to become a human resource who can gain understanding about risks by making profits with global strategy as well as domestic domestic traders. Therefore, I think your company is an environment where you can learn and grow the global know-how.
I would like to offer more customers the opportunity to participate in financial markets as research. I hope the Japanese economy will develop further and I would like to contribute to that. For that, we need to utilize financial products more than now. Because Japan can not earn money by trade and earns it by investment. So I believe that by providing information that makes use of your global network, it will be a bridge between domestic and global markets and provide your company's long-standing financial know-how to provide more profit than ever I will. And I would like to grow as many customers as possible to use new financial products.
I have increased participants as a tennis circle executive. Participants in my circle were declining, but since the circle occupies a large proportion in college life, it was the responsibility of the executives to make it possible for many people to enjoy it, and heard the members. Based on that we made a new battle division and increased practice days. There was also the opposite, but I explained the necessity concretely and gained the consent of all. In addition, I sent an e-mail encouraging everyone to join in order to increase the number of participants in the new project. Furthermore, I thought that there was less conversation between seniors and juniors and called for a conversation. From these, I learned that taking actions while thinking around will be a success. So you can act with a wide perspective.