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Syria Democracy This is my goal This is my dream, which I seek through my studies and efforts to achieve even part of it. I will spread the values ​​of democracy by all available means, especially through the internet, and I will teach children that every man has the freedom to express opinion and choice and alaways to stand out.I will teach them how democracy is a major reason for the rise of countries, as in America and European countries. I promise to make you proud to choose me. This is my first step to achieving my dream.

Syrian Democracy

This is my goal. This is my dream, which I seek through my studies and efforts to achieve a part of it. I will spread the values ​​of democracy by all available means, especially through the internet. I will teach children that every human being has the freedom to express his opinion, choice and is always allowed to stand out for each other.I will teach them how democracy is a major reason for the rise of countries as America and the European countries. I promise to make you proud if you choose me. This is my first step to achieve my dream.