Hi! Can you please check my English?
"I'm looking for 4 native English speakers who are interested in working in Japan with me, as an English teacher, a designer, a hairstylist, an interpreter or anything you are good at it. Anything is okay! What are you good at? Or it's okay if you just like Japan :)

I'm establishing a company that people around the world can work comfortably and happily starting in Japan. And I need 4 starting new members with me. All you need to do is email me your simple resume, and we'll meet and grab some coffee and chat :) Are you ready to do something new and exciting? There will be many foreigners in 2020 in Japan, so we should start it asap :) We do what we want to do. We do what we good at :) Simple!

Okay I made a few changes that you’ll notice and there was one sentence that I didn’t understand. This sentence was, “and I need a 4 starting my partner.” I tried to fix it, but I don’t know if I understood what you were trying to say.

I also noticed that you started a sentence with and. It is very rare to start a sentence with and. It is so unused that even English speakers have a hard time learning when the right time to start a sentence with and is. I also know you didn’t do this, but it is the same with the word because. You rarely to never start a sentence with because.


Most of the time in writing people do not write the the number, they write out the word form of the number. I noticed this in the sentence I did not understand and at the beginning. You said you needed 4 people. When writing you would say four people instead. Most of the time (when writing) you only use the actual number characters when telling time.

Ex. Five people went out to eat at 5:45.


The sentence at the end sounds a bit rude in most contexts “we do what we want to do” so I would advise taking that out, but you can keep it if needed.



My corrections:


"I'm looking for four native English speakers who are interested in working in Japan as an English teacher, a Designer, hairstylist, an interpreter or anything you are good at it. I'm establishing a company that people around the world can work comfortably, and happily. I need a four people starting as my partners. All you need to do is email me your simple resume, and we can meet, grab some coffee, and chat. :) Are you ready to do something new and exciting? There will be many foreigners in 2020 in Japan, so we should start it asap. :) We do what we want to do. We do what we’re good at. :) Simple!