A recent survey by a newspaper revealed that, out of 3,000 or so web-cameras now linked to the Internet in Tokyo area, about one third are not set with passwords properly. Some of them are meant for entertaiment; they keep shooting tourist spots like the Sky Tree Tower or Mt. Fuji all day; they're meant for everyone to see in the first place. However, most of the web-cameras have security purposes; they're used to keep an eye on your home while you're away. What these unprotected cameras are actually doing is, though, like sending out invitations to potential thieves, "Why don't you come visit us while we're away!" sembra naturale?

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alnnujoomi · Answer

"...about one-third aren't properly set with passwords."
"Some of them are meant for entertainment. They keep shooting tourist spots like the Sky Tree Tower or Mt. Fuji all day; they're meant..."
"However, most of the web-cameras have security purposes. They're used to keep an eye on your home while you're away."
"What these unprotected cameras are actually doing is sending out invitations to potential thieves."

Overall, good! Some sentences are just very long. You also can't use a ; more than once in the same sentence.

alnnujoomi · Answer

That is okay! It's hard for me to not write long sentences too. :D

That is okay! It's hard for me to not write long sentences too. :D

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