I wrote an instruction document about a business manner in Japan. Are there any grammatical errors in sentences below?

The Japanese business etiquette Instruction

The six steps of exchanging a business card:
This description is the process of exchanging of business cards between two people. Remember to handle business cards with both hands.
1) Prepare the correct number of cards you will need for the exchange

2) Bowing each other

3) Place your business cards on top of your business card holder

Make sure your cards are facing towards the receiver so that they can read the text. If you have a bilingual card, facing up the side of the receiver’s language. Ensure the card is turned towards the receiver. Remember the highest ranking people exchange cards first.

4) Use your right hand to offer your card, holding it by the top corner

Make sure no names or logos are covered up with your fingers when receiving a card. You will hold the business card holder in your left hand.

5) Give a brief self-introduction

6) Arrange cards on top of the card holder or on the table in the seating order
Keep the card on display during the meeting until ending it. Place the highest ranked person’s card on top on the card holder. This shows a respect to the person.

Question

I wrote an instruction document about a business manner in Japan. Are there any grammatical errors in sentences below?

The Japanese business etiquette Instruction
 	
The six steps of exchanging a business card:
This description is the process of exchanging of business cards between two people. Remember to handle business cards with both hands. 
1)	Prepare the correct number of cards you will need for the exchange 

2)	Bowing each other

3)	Place your business cards on top of your business card holder

Make sure your cards are facing towards the receiver so that they can read the text. If you have a bilingual card, facing up the side of the receiver’s language. Ensure the card is turned towards the receiver. Remember the highest ranking people exchange cards first.
 

4)	Use your right hand to offer your card, holding it by the top corner

Make sure no names or logos are covered up with your fingers when receiving a card. You will hold the business card holder in your left hand.
 

5)	Give a brief self-introduction


6)	Arrange cards on top of the card holder or on the table in the seating order
Keep the card on display during the meeting until ending it. Place the highest ranked person’s card on top on the card holder. This shows a respect to the person.

ZK920 · Accepted Answer

3) Place your cards on top of your card holder.

Make sure that your cards are facing upwards, so that the receiver can read the text. If you have a bilingual card, make sure that the side facing upwards is in the language that the receiver understands. Please remember that the businessman with the higher seniority must exchange his card first.

4) Use your right hand to offer your card, and ensure that you hold it from the top corner.

Make sure that no names or logos are covered with your fingers when handling a card. You will hold the card holder in your left hand.

5) Briefly introduce yourself to the businessman.

6) Arrange the cards on top of the card holder, or place them on the table. Keep the card on display during the meeting until its conclusion. Remember to place the most senior businessman's card at the top of the card holder. This is a sign of respect.

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