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19 giu 2018
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Inglese (Stati Uniti)
Domande Inglese (Stati Uniti)
I play the drums. When I was 15 years old, I started playing the drums. The reason I chose it was that it looked easy to play. However, playing the drums was not easy. After I enrolled in a high school, I joined a music activity. I got a band, and I played the drums. I practiced it much time to play it well. We always played rock musics. When I played the drums, I always did mimikopi which is just listing to a music and make a tab by myself. It was really hard when I started it, but thank to learn it, I did not need to spend money to buy tabs. Also, I believe that I could improve my playing skill. Playing the drums when I was high school is my good memory, and I want to enjoy playing the drums in the feature too!! sembra naturale?
I play the drums. When I was 15 years old, I started playing the drums. The reason I chose it was that it looked easy to play. However, playing the drums was not easy. After I enrolled in a high school, I joined a music activity. I got a band, and I played the drums. I practiced it much time to play it well. We always played rock musics. When I played the drums, I always did mimikopi which is just listing to a music and make a tab by myself. It was really hard when I started it, but thank to learn it, I did not need to spend money to buy tabs. Also, I believe that I could improve my playing skill. Playing the drums when I was high school is my good memory, and I want to enjoy playing the drums in the feature too!! sembra naturale?
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19 giu 2018
Domanda in primo piano
- Inglese (Stati Uniti)
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@hibiki52 You should change “enrolled in a high school” to “enrolled in high school”, and instead of “music activity” use “music group” or use a more specific word like “music class”. You should probably also change “I got a band” to “I joined a band”. I hope this helps some!
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@hibiki52 Sorry I meant to vote natural haha you have a couple of Grammar issues but the overall paragraph is really good
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@jess-ie Thank you for your comment! I want to know my grammar mistakes, so if you don’t mind, please teach me them🙇
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@HottiesBangtan Thank you for your comment!!
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Overall it’s a good paragraph, you just have some grammar issues.
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@Michael570610 Thank you for your comment😊 If you don’t mind, could you teach me grammar issues??
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@hibiki52 You should change “enrolled in a high school” to “enrolled in high school”, and instead of “music activity” use “music group” or use a more specific word like “music class”. You should probably also change “I got a band” to “I joined a band”. I hope this helps some!
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@Michael570610 Thank you for your support! I really appreciate it😭
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